Reply To: People still value artists in the age of advanced science and technology. What are the reasons? Are arts as important as science and technology?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing People still value artists in the age of advanced science and technology. What are the reasons? Are arts as important as science and technology? Reply To: People still value artists in the age of advanced science and technology. What are the reasons? Are arts as important as science and technology?

March 25, 2020 at 3:14 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Paragraphs are lengthy; restrict each paragraph to 90 words.

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