Reply To: A report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

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March 26, 2020 at 1:40 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 60% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.