All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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2. About 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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Taking history courses can do a benefit to help students, like having to obtain a better grasp of the previous incidents, making them clear about/making them cognizant of how the world has developed. However, it makes no sense that I am of the opinion that requiring all university students have to be required to take the matriculate in history courses/coursework whatever regardless of their field is unwise/imprudent. So, I am totally against the statement.

Admittedly, we can not deny that taking completing history courses is beneficial to students. It can really assist facilitate students‘ with their comprehensive overall development. History can broaden our visions, which means that we will grasp a great deal and enrich the scope of our knowledge about it. Thus, Having gained broad history knowledge, we will could converse with others have by drawing on numerous topics to talk with others, such as heroic figures heroes recorded in the long history river, sensational brutal wars, even (the development of America)[  unclear ].

However, when it comes to all university students, Even so, I believe that making the history courses a required one compulsory is not that rational won’t meet all students’ intellectual needs. Because not everyone has the a passion and interest in for history, . There is an old saying that interest is the best teacher in the world. Without passion, requirements this academic requirement can become the an unnecessary burden of for some students. They wlii not be motivated to study history, not to say enjoy learning it.

(Moreover, students majoring in a number of specific subjects, such as mathematics, computer science and physics, have tons of school work to finish.)[irrelevant/   ] (The most majority of them are not even able to understand the professional courses well. These students are in lack of energy for additional learning. )[  repetition with prior content ]Actually, history is a required class in our school. There is a common phenomenon that a prodigious number of students majoring in sciences write their homework when taking history courses, paying little attention to what the professors talk about.[This paragraph is off the topic.    ]

In conclusion, learning history benefits students, which can help us grasp more knowledge. But when it comes to all students required to take it, it does not make sense.[repetition   ] why? (First, as chances are that students void interests in history. Second, it is possible that a giagantic number of students are in deficient of energy.)[lots of grammatical errors   ]