An American film actor John Wayne said: “Tomorrow is the most important thing in life.” How is it important for individuals and countries to think about the future rather than focus on the present.

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    University: Jinan university
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    September 26, 2020 at 1:07 am

    An American film actor John Wayne said: “Tomorrow is the most important thing in life.” How is it important for individuals and countries to think about the future rather than focus on the present?

    People generally say that there are only three days in our lives: yesterday, today and tomorrow. Tomorrow is a symbol of the future which has a great effect on the development of people and countries.

    As for individuals, there will be more possibilities in the future, so we should pay more attention to the future in order to achieve our goals. A person will face many choices in his life.  We should know what we really need to benefit ourselves. When facing difficulties, it is helpful to make a plan for the future to solve problems. In addition to his career, looking towards the future to learn more useful skills will provide them with more opportunities for promotion.

    It will be more competitive to prepare for the future. Developing countries will face many social issues such as gender bias and climate changes during the process of development. But if they have a right direction to develop, these governments can easily reduce the influences on these issues. On the other hand, when technology and science reach their peak and improve hard, there will be many arguments and conflicts appearing around the world. So in order to make the world peaceful and developing, we are going to search for a breakthrough in technology and science which can make countries more competitive in the future.

    There will be more opportunities for employment and promotion which are prepared for people with preparations for the future. So individuals and counties should pay more attention to the future, which is significantly important instead of the present.

    October 1, 2020 at 3:56 pm

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