As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious. write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious. write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 

  • lobokwhite66
    University: BJFU
    Nationality: China
    November 1, 2021 at 5:38 am

    As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious. write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 

    <p class=”p1″>The statement does not accurately describe the process of acquiring knowledge. Getting more knowledge do make things more complex and mysterious, in modern science remains numerous hard and seemly inextricable problem. By solving them comes with new knowledge, and the new knowledge always lead us to the boundary of our understanding of the world, the unclear part always stay mysterious until we solve them. Nevertheless, the fact that knowledge can be learned proves things are comprehensible, with new knowledge, problems can be solved thus making things more comprehensible.</p>
    <p class=”p1″>First, knowledge is complicated, as we are solving tough challenges, new knowledge is born. Math is the grail of human intellectual. In 2000 the Clay Mathematics Institute (CMI) announces its seven Millennium Prize Problems, the problems are really perplex math problems on earth. It took years to figure out any of them. Yet only two years later, Russian mathematician Grigori Peremlan posted a solution to one of the geometric problems—solved the conundrum by a proof in three papers. More complicated knowledge was used to solve the problem, and as problem was solved, there is new piece of complex mathematical knowledge. Modern science has been developed for hundreds of years, everyday there are new papers being published. In the area of medical treatment, before a doctor can treat real patient in hospital, there is usually years of learning knowledge in the medical school. In sum, knowledge definitely would become even more complicated as we discover more things.</p>
    <p class=”p1″>Second, mysteriousness happen when we reached the edge of human knowledge, but the discovery never ended, so new mystery will keep coming out. The technology and knowledge today explain many theory but not everyone of them. As artificial intelligence becomes even smarter, will it has its own mind and consciousness that may hurt humankind? Will animals organs runs well on human body so that more lives could be saved? Will the earth explode someday and human kind have to move to the Mars? In every sector, scientists are working hard to solve the mystery part, some of them were solved: in a latest published article from New York University, a genetically modified pig’s kidney was connected with a human volunteer and the kidney works out well for 54 hours without rejection of the person’s immune system. The experiment was a breakthrough in this field. Scientists are closer to solving the mystery. To sum up, mysteriousness seems like the byproduct of human exploration.</p>

    lobokwhite66
    University: BJFU
    Nationality: China
    November 1, 2021 at 5:38 am

    <p class=”p2″>Thirdly, acquiring knowledge is the process to understand the world, and the process is the evidence that the world can be comprehended. When people are more informed, the understand things better. Knowledge has varied forms: knowledge is written in papers, which researchers could read and use to design or solve their own problems. The knowledge lies in mentor’s experience, as in a company a mentor can use his own experience to guide young people out of a stack of working problems. Also, As new diseases coming out of the world out of nowhere, such as the COVID-19, modern medical scientists quickly researched it and then we have the vaccine to better protect us, the mysterious disease can be solved by professionals. Although they have not solve all the puzzles yet, given enough time, more will be discovered and understand by people.</p>
    <p class=”p2″>As I have discussed, knowledge itself is complicated and mysterious, learning and solving problems make it even more so. But I cannot agree with the statement saying that learning new knowledge make things more harder to understand, the fact is the opposite.<span class=”Apple-converted-space”> </span></p>

    November 2, 2021 at 5:06 pm

    Essay too long, please limit to 400 words. Also remove the embedded formating. Thanks.

    lobokwhite66
    University: BJFU
    Nationality: China
    November 10, 2021 at 3:23 am

    couldn t find edit or delete btn, so i post a new one

    November 11, 2021 at 1:56 pm

    The statement does not accurately describe the process of acquiring knowledge. Getting more knowledge do make things more complex and mysterious, in modern science remains numerous hard and seemly inextricable problem. By solving them comes with new knowledge, and the new knowledge always lead us to the boundary of our understanding of the world, the unclear part always stay mysterious until we solve them. Nevertheless, the fact that knowledge can be learned proves things are comprehensible, with new knowledge, problems can be solved thus making things more comprehensible.

    First, knowledge is complicated, as we are solving tough challenges, new knowledge is born. Math is the grail of human intellectual. In 2000 the Clay Mathematics Institute (CMI) announces its seven Millennium Prize Problems, the problems are really perplex math problems on earth. It took years to figure out any of them. Yet only two years later, Russian mathematician Grigori Peremlan posted a solution to one of the geometric problems—solved the conundrum by a proof in three papers. More complicated knowledge was used to solve the problem, and as problem was solved, there is new piece of complex mathematical knowledge.

    Second, mysteriousness happen when we reached the edge of human knowledge. Technology and knowledge today explain many theory but not everyone of them. As artificial intelligence becomes even smarter, will it has its own mind and consciousness that may hurt humankind? Will animals organs runs well on human body so that more lives could be saved? Will the earth explode someday and human kind have to move to the Mars? In every sector, scientists are working hard to solve the mystery part, some of them were solved: in a latest published article from New York University, a genetically modified pig’s kidney was connected with a human volunteer and the kidney works out well for 54 hours without rejection of the person’s immune system. The experiment was a breakthrough in this field. To sum up, mysteriousness seems like the byproduct of human exploration.

    Thirdly, acquiring knowledge is the process to understand the world, and the process is the evidence that the world can be comprehended. Knowledge has varied forms: in papers, which researchers could read and use to design or solve their own problems. The knowledge lies in mentor’s experience, as in a company a mentor can use his own experience to guide young people out of a stack of working problems. Also, As new diseases coming out of the world out of nowhere, such as the COVID-19, modern medical scientists quickly researched it and then we have the vaccine to better protect us, the mysterious disease can be solved by professionals. Although they have not solve all the puzzles yet, given enough time, more will be discovered and understand by people.

    November 11, 2021 at 2:00 pm

    Feedback provided on other submission

    lobokwhite66
    University: BJFU
    Nationality: China
    November 13, 2021 at 3:03 am

    couldnt publish the article, keep telling me the publication exist and redirect me to this page, although i have modified the title ..

    lobokwhite66
    University: BJFU
    Nationality: China
    November 13, 2021 at 3:09 am

    The statement does not accurately describe the process of acquiring knowledge. Learning more knowledge does make things more complex and mysterious, in modern science remains numerous complicated and seemly inextricable problems. Solving them comes with new knowledge, and the knowledge always leads us to the boundary of our understanding of the world; the unclear part stays mysterious until we solve them. Nevertheless, the fact that knowledge exists in videos and books proves that things are comprehensible, even they necessarily make things more comprehensible.

    First, knowledge is complicated. As we are solving tough challenges, new knowledge is born. Math is the grail of human intellect. In 2000 the Clay Mathematics Institute (CMI) announced its seven Millennium Prize Problems. It took years to figure out any of them. Nevertheless, only two years later, Russian mathematician Grigori Peremlan posted a solution to one of the geometric problems—solved the conundrum by proof in three papers. More detailed new knowledge emerged to solve the problem.

    Second, mysteriousness happens when we reach the edge of human knowledge. Technology and knowledge today explain many theories but not every one of them. As artificial intelligence becomes even more brilliant, will it have its mind and consciousness to hurt humankind? Will animal organs run well on the human body so that more lives can live longer? Will the earth explode someday, and humankind have to move to Mars? In every sector, scientists are working hard to solve the mystery part. In the latest published article from New York University, a genetically modified pig’s kidney connected with a human volunteer and the kidney works out well for 54 hours without rejection of the person’s immune system. The experiment was a breakthrough in this field. To sum up, mysteriousness seems like the byproduct of human exploration.

    Thirdly, acquiring knowledge is the process of understanding the world, and the process is the evidence that the world can be comprehended. Knowledge has varied forms: In papers, which researchers could read and use to design or solve problems. In minds, mentors can use their own experience to guide young people out of a stack of working problems. Also, as new diseases come out of the world out of nowhere, such as the COVID-19, modern medical scientists quickly researched it. Then we have the vaccine to protect us better, and professionals can solve the mysterious disease. Although they have not solved all the puzzles yet, given enough time, people will discover and understand more.

    November 15, 2021 at 12:34 pm

    The statement does not accurately describe the process of acquiring knowledge. Learning more knowledge does make things more complex and mysterious, in modern science (for example, there) remains numerous complicated and seemly inextricable problems (in modern science). Solving them comes with (existing problems brings) new knowledge, and the (this acquired) knowledge always (delete) leads us to the boundary of our understanding of the world; the unclear part stays (parts remain) mysterious until we solve them. Nevertheless, the fact that knowledge exists in videos and books proves that things (complex topics) are comprehensible, even they necessarily make things more comprehensible (delete).

    First, knowledge is complicated. As we are solving (solve) tough challenges, new knowledge is born. Math is the grail (foundation) of human intellect. In 2000 the Clay Mathematics Institute (CMI) announced its seven Millennium Prize Problems. (, and) it took years to figure out any of (solve) them. Nevertheless, only two years later, Russian mathematician Grigori Peremlan posted a solution to one of the geometric problems—solved the conundrum by proof in three papers (delete). More detailed new knowledge emerged to solve the problem.

    Second, mysteriousness happens when we reach the edge of human knowledge. Technology and knowledge today explain many theories but not every one of them. As artificial intelligence becomes even more brilliant, will it have its mind and consciousness to (delete) hurt humankind? Will animal organs run well on the human body so that more lives can live longer (our lifespan is extended)? Will the earth explode someday, and humankind have to move to Mars? In every sector, scientists are working hard to solve the mystery part (unknown). In the latest published article from New York University, a genetically modified pig’s kidney connected with a human volunteer and the kidney works out well (functioned) for 54 hours without rejection of the person’s immune system. The experiment was a breakthrough in this field. To sum up, mysteriousness seems like the byproduct of human exploration.

    Thirdly, acquiring knowledge is the process of understanding the world, and the process is the evidence that the world can be comprehended (delete). Knowledge has varied forms: In (including academic) papers, which researchers could (delete) read and use to design or solve problems. In minds, mentors can use their own experience to guide young people out of a stack of working problems (delete). Also, as new diseases come out of the world out of nowhere (emerge), such as the COVID-19, modern medical scientists quickly researched it. Then we have the vaccine (We produced vaccine) to protect us better, and professionals can solve the mysterious disease. Although they have not solved all the puzzles yet, given enough time, people will discover and understand more.

    November 23, 2021 at 5:07 pm

    Final revision