It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living far from home?

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    University: Beijing Itstitute of Graphic Communication
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    August 4, 2019 at 3:42 pm

    IELTS Writing TOPIC: It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living far from home?

    In the present-day society , youngsters symbolize hopes and forces of our nation. Accordingly, it has become a hot topic that how to enhance their comprehensive qualities when they are studying in college, Then, living away from home has become a trend for a host of teenagers, with both positive and negative impacts.

    Living at universities may inspire young people to build up an essential awareness which can ensure youngsters to communicate with acquaintances or classmates more friendly and kindly, Since the environment where have a lot of peers from different area with a variety of cultures and habits encourages students to adapt it and cultivate experience and competence of cooperating and helping with each other. In addition, strengthening their social and cooperative abilities through taking more time with our schoolmates are beneficial for their work and life in the future.

    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance skills and logic of doing anything independently. In the contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parents’ love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enable them to improve their overall qualities for dealing with everything in life, such as washing clothes, make curriculum choices and cleaning rooms which do not have to be academic ones.

    However, parents in large numbers are worried about their children when they are staying at long-distance universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, like school violence and traffic jams, have bad influence upon teenagers’ growth. But with the scientific and technological development growing rapidly, young people can contact with their families whenever immediately. Additionally, nowadays, the government makes policies to protect youngsters no matter where they are.

    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families when they are studying in the college, especially when becoming more independent and cooperative are taken into consideration.

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    August 6, 2019 at 4:05 am

    Score: 40.9

    Suggestions for Improvement

    • Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts;
    • Shorten/split sentences exceeding 20 words.

    Problems Highlight

    In the present-day society , [ punctuation placement error  ]youngsters symbolize hopes and forces of our nation. Accordingly, it has become a hot topic that how to enhance their comprehensive qualities when they are studying in college, [ punctuation error  ]Then, living away from home has become a trend for a host of teenagers, with both positive and negative impacts.【wordy]/[ unclear  ]
     
    Living at universities may inspire young people to build up an essential awareness which can ensure youngsters to communicate with acquaintances or classmates more friendly and kindly, Since [  spelling error ]the environment where [grammatical error   ]have a lot of peers from different area[  word form error ] with a variety of cultures and habits encourages students to adapt[ preposition error  ] it and cultivate experience and competence of cooperating and helping with each other. [wordy]In addition, strengthening their [  unclear pronoun ]social and cooperative abilities through taking more time with our schoolmates are beneficial for their work and life in the future.【wordy]
     
    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance skills and logic of doing anything independently. In the contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parents’ love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enable [ grammatical error  ]them to improve their overall qualities for dealing with everything in life, such as washing clothes, make curriculum choices and cleaning rooms which do not have to be academic ones.【wordy]
     
    However, parents in large numbers are worried about their children when they [  unclear pronoun ]are staying at long-distance universities.[wordy] Admittedly, unsafe events, like school violence and traffic jams, have [  article error ]bad influence upon teenagers’ growth. [wordy]But with the scientific and technological development growing rapidly, young people can contact with[ preposition error  ] their families whenever immediately. [wordy]Additionally, nowadays, the government makes policies to protect youngsters no matter where they are.【wordy]
     
    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families when they are studying in the college, especially when becoming more independent and cooperative are taken into consideration. [wordy]/awkward writing.

    Comment: There are more errors than those highlighted ones. Please revise and resubmit your essay for further assessment and revision.  Regards.

    Writing Tips

    1. Absolute Statement: Avoid using absolute statement.
    2. ARTICLE ERROR: errors concerning a, an, the. This is a prominent issue for Chinese students. Make sure to add/remove/change articles considering a specific context.
    3. BE VERBS: BE verbs are dull and vague. Use concrete verbs to replace BE verbs whenever needed. I.E. commercials are beneficial to children. – Commercials benefit children.
    4. COHERENCE: To improve the natural flow from one sentence to the other, make the subject of a sentence echo the subject, or the object, of the last sentence.
    5. COORDINATING CONJUNCTION error: In formal writing, a comma is needed when the 7 coordinating words (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so – FANBOYS) are connecting sentences/clauses.
    6. Effectiveness: use verbs instead of BE+adjectives to improve effectiveness.
    7. Grammatical Errors: grammatical mistakes.
    8. It + Be + Verb:  Wordy.
    9. Logical confusion. Although a sentence is grammatically correct, often it is logically/factually confusing. Having written a sentence, ask yourself if the sentence is logically complete, and/or factually true.
    10. NOT problem. Experienced writers often avoid using NOT in English writing. I.e. Jack was very upset because he had not passed the GRE test. – I.e. Jack was very upset because he had failed the GRE test.
    11. PASSIVE VOICE: In many cases, clarity suffers when using passive voice. In particular linguistic contexts, using passive voice is fine.
    12. Semicolon: Use a semicolon in front of an adverb/adverbial phrase.
    13. Subjunctive: Memorize the grammatical rules for subjunctive mood.
    14. There Be Sentence: Wordy
    15. Unclear Pronouns: A pronoun (it, this, that, they, them., etc) unclearly refers to the prior content. For example, the first sentence contains two singular nouns, so IT in the second sentence can refer either of them.
    16. Unparalleled Structure:  use paralleled structures, including tense.
    17. VERBOSE: The sentence/phrase can be simplified.
    18. WEAK VERBS: an alternative verb may help improve sentence effectiveness and clarity. The Internet makes us know many things. – The Internet helps us (to) know many things.
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    chenyue315513
    University: Beijing Itstitute of Graphic Communication
    Nationality: China
    August 6, 2019 at 4:06 pm

    In the present-day society, youngsters symbolize hopes and forces of our nation. Accordingly, it has become a hot topic that how to enhance their comprehensive qualities when they are studying in college. Then, choosing to live away from home, with both positive and negative impacts.

    Living at universities may inspire young people to build up an essential awareness which ensure them to communicate with acquaintances or classmates more friendly and kindly. Since the environment which have many peers from different areas with a variety of cultures and habits encourages students to adapt to it and cultivate experience and competence of communication. In addition, like learning English in an English-speaking country, the young staying with schoolmates can strengthen their social and cooperative abilities.

    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance skills and logic of doing anything independently. In the contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parents’ love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enable them to deal with everything in life, such as washing clothes, make curriculum choices and cleaning rooms.

    However, parents in large numbers are worried about their children at long-distance universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, like school violence and traffic jams, have harmful influence for teenagers. But with the scientific and technological development growing rapidly, young people can contact to their families whenever and wherever. Additionally, nowadays, the government makes effective policies to protect youngsters.

    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families in college life, especially when becoming more independent and cooperative are taken into consideration.

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    August 6, 2019 at 4:25 pm

    Score: 42.3

    Suggestions for Improvement

    • Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts;
    • Shorten/split sentences exceeding 20 words.

    Problems Highlight

    In (the present-day society) [awkward writing  ], youngsters symbolize hopes and forces [ wrong word ]of our nation. Accordingly, it has become a hot topic that how to enhance their[unclear pronoun/youngsters? Hopes? Forces?  ] comprehensive qualities when they are studying in college. Then, choosing to live away from home, with both positive and negative impacts. [ grammatical error/missing a verb ]
     
    Living at universities may inspire young people to build up an essential awareness which that ensure[  grammatical error] them to communicate with acquaintances or classmates more friendly and kindly[ repetition/ friends=kindly ]. [Wordy]Since the environment which  that have [ has ]many peers from different areas with a variety of cultures and habits encourages students to adapt to it [ unclear pronoun ]and cultivate[ grammatical error ] experience and competence of communication. [Wordy]In addition, like learning English in an English-speaking country, the young [unparalleled structure/learning- the young  ]staying with schoolmates can strengthen their social and cooperative abilities.[Wordy]
     
    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance skills and logic [ logical incompleteness ]of doing anything independently. In the contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parents’ parental love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enable them to deal with everything in life, such as washing clothes, make [  unparalleled structure/washing-make]curriculum choices and cleaning rooms.[Wordy]
     
    However, parents in large numbers are worried about their children at long-distance universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, like school violence and traffic jams, have harmful influence for [  wrong preposition]teenagers. But with the scientific and technological development growing rapidly[redundancy/ development = growing  ], young people can contact to [ preposition error ]their families whenever and wherever.[Wordy] Additionally, nowadays, the government makes effective policies to protect youngsters.
     
    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families in college life, especially when becoming more independent and cooperative are taken into consideration. [Wordy/awkward writing]

    Comment: There are more errors than those highlighted ones. Please revise and resubmit your essay for further assessment and revision.  Regards.

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    Writing Tips

    1. Absolute Statement: Avoid using absolute statement.
    2. ARTICLE ERROR: errors concerning a, an, the. This is a prominent issue for Chinese students. Make sure to add/remove/change articles considering a specific context.
    3. BE VERBS: BE verbs are dull and vague. Use concrete verbs to replace BE verbs whenever needed. I.E. commercials are beneficial to children. – Commercials benefit children.
    4. COHERENCE: To improve the natural flow from one sentence to the other, make the subject of a sentence echo the subject, or the object, of the last sentence.
    5. COORDINATING CONJUNCTION error: In formal writing, a comma is needed when the 7 coordinating words (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so – FANBOYS) are connecting sentences/clauses.
    6. Effectiveness: use verbs instead of BE+adjectives to improve effectiveness.
    7. Grammatical Errors: grammatical mistakes.
    8. It + Be + Verb:  Wordy.
    9. Logical confusion. Although a sentence is grammatically correct, often it is logically/factually confusing. Having written a sentence, ask yourself if the sentence is logically complete, and/or factually true.
    10. NOT problem. Experienced writers often avoid using NOT in English writing. I.e. Jack was very upset because he had not passed the GRE test. – I.e. Jack was very upset because he had failed the GRE test.
    11. PASSIVE VOICE: In many cases, clarity suffers when using passive voice. In particular linguistic contexts, using passive voice is fine.
    12. Semicolon: Use a semicolon in front of an adverb/adverbial phrase.
    13. Subjunctive: Memorize the grammatical rules for subjunctive mood.
    14. There Be Sentence: Wordy
    15. Unclear Pronouns: A pronoun (it, this, that, they, them., etc) unclearly refers to the prior content. For example, the first sentence contains two singular nouns, so IT in the second sentence can refer either of them.
    16. Unparalleled Structure:  use paralleled structures, including tense.
    17. VERBOSE: The sentence/phrase can be simplified.
    18. WEAK VERBS: an alternative verb may help improve sentence effectiveness and clarity. The Internet makes us know many things. – The Internet helps us (to) know many things.
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    chenyue315513
    University: Beijing Itstitute of Graphic Communication
    Nationality: China
    August 7, 2019 at 4:59 am

    In modern society, youngsters symbolize the hope and future of our nation. Accordingly, it has become a hot topic that how to enhance young people comprehensive qualities when they are studying in college. Then, some professors claim that choosing to live away from home is better for students. From different perspective, However, this choice makes both positive and negative impacts.

    Living away from parents can often develop the young’s communicational abilities. In addition, this occasion inspires youngsters to communicate with classmates or acquaintances more friendly.  Since the environment that has many peers from different areas with a variety of cultures and habits encourages students to adapt to others and foster social competence.  And like learning English in an ancient-tongue country, staying with schoolmates can strengthen their social abilities more easily.

    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance skills of doing anything independently. In the contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parental love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enable them to washing clothes, making curriculum choices and cleaning rooms on their own.

    However, parents in large numbers are worried about their children at long-distance universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, like school violence and traffic jams, have harmful influence on teenagers. But with the scientific and technological development rapidly, young people can keep in touch with their families at any time.  Additionally, nowadays, the government makes effective policies to protect youngsters.

    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families in college life. They should not only socialize more naturally, but also deal tasks more maturely. For improving children’s overall qualities, universities is a useful setting upon their growth.

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    August 11, 2019 at 3:02 am

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    August 14, 2019 at 1:47 am

    Score: 47.8

    Suggestions for Improvement

    • Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts;
    • Shorten/split sentences exceeding 20 words.

    Problems Highlight

    In modern society, youngsters symbolize the hope and future of our nation. Accordingly, it has become a hot topic that how to enhance young people‘s comprehensive qualities when they are studying in at college. ThenOn this matter, some professors claim that choosing to live away from home is better for students. From different perspective [ word form error ] , However, [ spelling error/however ] this choice makes both positive and negative impacts.
     
    Living away from parents can often help develop the young’s communicational abilities. In addition, this occasion inspires youngsters [ repetition/the young ] to communicate with classmates or acquaintances more friendly. [Wordy] Since the environment that has many peers from different areas, with a variety of cultures and habits encourages students to adapt to others and foster social competence. [Wordy] And [ Coordination word error ] like Like learning English in an ancient-tongue country, staying with schoolmates can strengthen their [Unclear pronoun  ] social abilities more easily.[Wordy]
     
    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance students’ skills of doing anything independently. In the contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parental love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enable [grammatical error  ] them to washing [ grammatical error ] clothes, making curriculum choices and cleaning rooms on their own. [Wordy]
     
    However, parents in large numbers are worried about their children at long-distance universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, like [ Informal/such as ] school violence and traffic jams, have harmful influence on teenagers. But with the [article error  ] scientific and technological development rapidly, young people can keep in touch with their families at any time.  Additionally, nowadays, the government makes effective policies to protect youngsters.
     
    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families in college life. They should not only socialize more naturally, [ punctuation error ] but also deal tasks more maturely. For improving children’s overall qualities, universities is [ grammatical error ] a useful setting upon their [unclear pronoun  ] growth.

    Comment: There are more errors than those highlighted ones. Please revise and resubmit your essay for further assessment and revision.  Regards.

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    Writing Tips

    1. Absolute Statement: Avoid using absolute statement.
    2. ARTICLE ERROR: errors concerning a, an, the. This is a prominent issue for Chinese students. Make sure to add/remove/change articles considering a specific context.
    3. BE VERBS: BE verbs are dull and vague. Use concrete verbs to replace BE verbs whenever needed. I.E. commercials are beneficial to children. – Commercials benefit children.
    4. COHERENCE: To improve the natural flow from one sentence to the other, make the subject of a sentence echo the subject, or the object, of the last sentence.
    5. COORDINATING CONJUNCTION error: In formal writing, a comma is needed when the 7 coordinating words (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so – FANBOYS) are connecting sentences/clauses.
    6. Effectiveness: use verbs instead of BE+adjectives to improve effectiveness.
    7. Grammatical Errors: grammatical mistakes.
    8. It + Be + Verb:  Wordy.
    9. Logical confusion. Although a sentence is grammatically correct, often it is logically/factually confusing. Having written a sentence, ask yourself if the sentence is logically complete, and/or factually true.
    10. NOT problem. Experienced writers often avoid using NOT in English writing. I.e. Jack was very upset because he had not passed the GRE test. – I.e. Jack was very upset because he had failed the GRE test.
    11. PASSIVE VOICE: In many cases, clarity suffers when using passive voice. In particular linguistic contexts, using passive voice is fine.
    12. Semicolon: Use a semicolon in front of an adverb/adverbial phrase.
    13. Subjunctive: Memorize the grammatical rules for subjunctive mood.
    14. There Be Sentence: Wordy
    15. Unclear Pronouns: A pronoun (it, this, that, they, them., etc) unclearly refers to the prior content. For example, the first sentence contains two singular nouns, so IT in the second sentence can refer either of them.
    16. Unparalleled Structure:  use paralleled structures, including tense.
    17. VERBOSE: The sentence/phrase can be simplified.
    18. WEAK VERBS: an alternative verb may help improve sentence effectiveness and clarity. The Internet makes us know many things. – The Internet helps us (to) know many things.
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    University: Beijing Itstitute of Graphic Communication
    Nationality: China
    August 17, 2019 at 2:28 pm

    In modern society, youngsters symbolize the hope and future of our nation. Accordingly, it has become a hot topic that how to enhance young people‘s comprehensive qualities when they at college. On this matter, some professors claim that choosing to live away from home is better for students. From different perspectives, however, this choice makes both positive and negative impacts.

    Living away from parents can help develop the young’s communicational abilities. As this occasion, with many peers from different areas, inspires them to communicate with classmates frequently. Meantime, youngsters’ social abilities may be promoted through adapting to a variety of cultures and customs. Like learning English in an ancient-tongue country, staying in a special environment can help students learn new things quickly.

    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance students’ skills of doing anything independently. In the contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parental love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enables them to wash clothes, make curriculum choices and clean rooms on their own.

    However, parents in large numbers are worried about their children at long-distance universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, such as school violence and traffic jams, have harmful influence on teenagers. But with scientific and technological development rapidly, young people can keep in touch with their families at any time.  Additionally, the government makes effective policies to protect youngsters.

    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families in college life. They should not only socialize more naturally, but also deal tasks more maturely. For improving children’s overall qualities, university is a useful setting upon teenagers’ growth.

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    August 26, 2019 at 10:54 pm

    Score: 50.2

    Suggestions for Improvement

    • Convert passive sentences into their active counterparts;
    • Shorten/split sentences exceeding 20 words.

    Problems Highlight

    IELTS Writing TOPIC: It is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living far from home?

    In modern society, youngsters symbolize the hope and future of our nation. Accordingly, it has become a hot topic that how to enhance [It is foolish to use content from other essays  ] Therefore, enhancing young people‘s college students’ comprehensive qualities remains critical when they at college. On this matter, some professors claim that choosing to live away from home is better for students. From different perspectives, however, this choice makes both positive and negative impacts.

    Living away from parents can help develop the young’s communicational abilities. As this occasion, with many peers from different areas, inspires them to communicate with classmates frequently. [ Awkward writing   ]Meantime, youngsters’ social abilities may be promoted [passive/improve  ]through while adapting to a variety of diverse cultures and customs. Like learning English in an ancient-tongue country, staying in a special environment can help students learn new things quickly.

    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance students’ independent working skills of doing anything independently. In the contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parental love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enables them to wash clothes, make curriculum choices and clean rooms on their own.

    However, many parents in large numbers are worried about their children at long-distance universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, such as school violence and traffic jams, have a harmful influence on teenagers. But with scientific and technological development rapidly, young people can keep in touch with their families at any time.  Additionally, the government makes effective policies to protect youngsters.

    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families in during college life. They should not only socialize more naturally(, )but also deal with tasks more maturely. For improving children’s overall qualities, university is a useful setting upon teenagers’ growth.

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    WritersForMe Writing Tips

    1. Absolute Statement: Avoid using absolute statement.
    2. ARTICLE ERROR: errors concerning a, an, the. This is a prominent issue for Chinese students. Make sure to add/remove/change articles considering a specific context.
    3. BE VERBS: BE verbs are dull and vague. Use concrete verbs to replace BE verbs whenever needed. I.E. commercials are beneficial to children. – Commercials benefit children.
    4. COHERENCE: To improve the natural flow from one sentence to the other, make the subject of a sentence echo the subject, or the object, of the last sentence.
    5. COORDINATING CONJUNCTION error: In formal writing, a comma is needed when the 7 coordinating words (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so – FANBOYS) are connecting sentences/clauses.
    6. Effectiveness: use verbs instead of BE+adjectives to improve effectiveness.
    7. Grammatical Errors: grammatical mistakes.
    8. It + Be + Verb:  Wordy.
    9. Logical confusion. Although a sentence is grammatically correct, often it is logically/factually confusing. Having written a sentence, ask yourself if the sentence is logically complete, and/or factually true.
    10. NOT problem. Experienced writers often avoid using NOT in English writing. I.e. Jack was very upset because he had not passed the GRE test. – I.e. Jack was very upset because he had failed the GRE test.
    11. PASSIVE VOICE: In many cases, clarity suffers when using passive voice. In particular linguistic contexts, using passive voice is fine.
    12. Semicolon: Use a semicolon in front of an adverb/adverbial phrase.
    13. Subjunctive: Memorize the grammatical rules for subjunctive mood.
    14. There Be Sentence: Wordy
    15. Unclear Pronouns: A pronoun (it, this, that, they, them., etc) unclearly refers to the prior content. For example, the first sentence contains two singular nouns, so IT in the second sentence can refer either of them.
    16. Unparalleled Structure:  use paralleled structures, including tense.
    17. VERBOSE: The sentence/phrase can be simplified.
    18. WEAK VERBS: an alternative verb may help improve sentence effectiveness and clarity. The Internet makes us know many things. – The Internet helps us (to) know many things.

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    University: Beijing Itstitute of Graphic Communication
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    August 30, 2019 at 4:39 am

    In modern society, youngsters symbolize the hope and future of our nation. Therefore, enhancing college students’ comprehensive qualities remains critical . On this matter, some professors claim that choosing to live away from home is better for students. From different perspectives, however, this choice makes both positive and negative impacts.

    Living away from parents can help develop the young’s communicational abilities. Staying with many peers from different areas can inspire them to communicate with each other frequently. Meantime, youngsters’ social abilities may be improve while adapting to diverse cultures and customs. Like learning English in an ancient-tongue country, staying in a special environment can help students learn new things quickly.

    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance students’ independent working skills . In contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parental love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enables them to wash clothes, make curriculum choices and clean rooms on their own.

    However, many parents are worried about their children at long-distance universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, such as school violence and traffic jams, have a harmful influence on teenagers. But with scientific and technological development rapidly, young people can keep in touch with their families at any time.  Additionally, the government makes effective policies to protect youngsters.

    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families during college life. They should not only socialize more naturally but also deal with tasks more maturely. For improving children’s overall qualities, university is a useful setting upon their growth.

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    September 3, 2019 at 10:13 pm

    Score: 49.3

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    Final Revision

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    Final Revision

    In modern society, youngsters symbolize the hope and future of our nation. Therefore, comprehensively enhancing college students’ qualities remains critical. On this matter, some professors claim that choosing to live away from home is better for students. From different perspectives, however, this choice has both positive and negative impacts.

    Living away from parents can help develop the youths’ communication/communicative abilities. Staying with many peers from different areas can inspire them to communicate with each other frequently. Meantime, youngsters’ social abilities may be improved while adapting to diverse cultures and customs. Like learning English in an ancient foreign country, living in a special environment can help students learn new things quickly.

    Meanwhile, living away from home can also enhance students’ independent working skills. In contemporary life, a growing number of young people find it quite comfortable to enjoy parental love and attention. Nonetheless, it is staying away from their parents that enables them to wash clothes, make curriculum choices and clean their rooms on their own.

    However, many parents are worried about their children attending distant universities. Admittedly, unsafe events, such as school violence and traffic jams, have a harmful influence on teenagers. But with rapid scientific and technological development, young people can keep in touch with their families at any time. Additionally, the government makes effective policies to protect youngsters.

    To sum up, it is better for youngsters to live away from their families during college life. They would not only socialize more naturally but also would be able to deal with tasks more maturely. To improve children’s overall qualities, university is a useful setting for their growth.

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