Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective. Comic, Book, Radio, Television, Film, Theater. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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February 28, 2020 at 8:29 am
Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective. Comic, Book, Radio, Television, Film, Theater. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Now, people can communicate information by lots of different media like comics，radios, books, films, cell phone and so on. All types of media have their power to communicate information, I believe that films, books and radios are the most effective tools for conveying information among these six media.
On the one hand, books, radios and films have their disadvantages by comparison with each other. Firstly, books have less attraction to many people than other media, and reading books definitely requires a silent atmosphere. Secondly, the content of radios is only a part of the books, and it is easy to miss the keyword while listening to the radio. Thirdly, films sometimes contain the artistic aesthetic of the director, so some people probably don’t understand the details of the movie.
On the other hand, certainly they also have their irreplaceable advantages. Firstly, books are the most instructive media that help us to nourish our mind and give us a positive direction to learn a new knowledge or a skill. Secondly, radios are completely accessible way to gain information by cell phone in anywhere and anytime, especially while we’re driving or traveling. Thirdly, A film director would mix different subject content and ingenious ideas in his film for people to keep exploring constantly in the future, such as the movie Space Walk.
In conclusion, I can understand we can easily communicate information in more ways, but it seems to me that books, radios and films are the most powerful and effective media to us because of their uniqueness.
February 29, 2020 at 2:53 amScore: ungraded
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March 1, 2020 at 7:30 amNowadays, people can communicate information through lots of different media like comics, cell phones, radios, books, movies and so on. All types of media have their power to convey information. And I believe that films, books , radios are the most effective tools for conveying information among these six media.
On the one hand, books, radios , films have their disadvantages through comparison with each other. Firstly, reading books has less attraction to many people than other media, and probably requires a silent atmosphere. Secondly, the content of the radios is only a part of the books. And it is difficult for us to remember every detail by listening to the radios. Thirdly, films sometimes contain the artistic aesthetic of the director, and are hard for some people to understand the content.
On the other hand, these three media also have their all-important advantages. Firstly, books are the most instructive media that help us to study. Reading books can nourish our minds and give us a positive direction to learn a new knowledge. Secondly, radios are accessible way to gain information by cell phones anywhere and anytime, especially while we’re driving or traveling. Thirdly, a film director would mix different subjects and ingenious ideas in his film for people to keep exploring. And It can bring us a different visual experience.
In conclusion, Nowadays we can easily communicate information in more ways. And it seems to me that books, radios, films are the most effective media for us because of their uniqueness.
March 2, 2020 at 3:24 amScore: 56.8
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March 3, 2020 at 4:26 amIn our daily life, people can communicate information through lots of different media like comics, cell phones, radios, books, movies and so on. All types of media for information interchange have their advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, films, books, radios are the most effective tools for conveying information among these six media.
On the one hand, books, radios, films have their disadvantages through comparison with each other. Firstly, reading books has less attraction to many people than other media and probably requires a silent atmosphere. Secondly, the contents of the radio are only part of the book. It’s hard for us to remember every detail when you are listening to the radio to learn knowledge. Thirdly, films sometimes contain the artistic aesthetic of the director and are hard for some people to understand the content.
On the other hand, these three media also have their all-important advantages. Firstly, books are the most instructive media that help us to study. Reading books can nourish our minds and help us to learn new knowledge in a positive direction. Secondly, radios are convenient tools for us to gain information by cell phones anywhere and anytime, especially while we’re driving or traveling. Thirdly, a movie director would mix different subjects and ingenious ideas in his film for people to keep exploring. Films also can bring us a different visual experience and happiness.
In conclusion, nowadays we can easily communicate information in more ways. It seems to me that books, radios, films are the most powerful and effective media for us because of their uniqueness.
March 3, 2020 at 9:43 pmScore: 55.7
In our daily life, people can communicate information through lots of [redundant/ lots of = different ] different media like [informal/such as ] comics, cell phones, radios, books, movies and so on. All types of media for information interchange have their advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, films, books, radios are the most effective tools for conveying information among these six media.
On the one hand, books, radios, films have their disadvantages (through comparison with each other) [ unclear] . Firstly, reading books has less attraction to many people (than other media) [misplaced ] and probably requires a silent atmosphere [wrong word ] . Secondly, the contents of the radio are only part of the book. [lack connection from the prior sentence ] It’s [informal ] hard for us to remember every detail when you [ shift of person] are listening to the radio to learn knowledge. Thirdly, films sometimes contain the artistic aesthetic of the director and are [ unparalleled/ contain-are] hard for some people to understand the content.
On the other hand, these three media also have their all-important advantages. Firstly, books are the most instructive media that help us to study. Reading books can nourish our minds and help us to learn new knowledge [repetition/expand our intellectual boundary ]
in a positive direction. Secondly, radios are [ article error] convenient tools for us to gain information by cell phones [ unclear] anywhere and anytime, especially while we’re driving or traveling. Thirdly, a movie director would mix different subjects and ingenious ideas in his film for people to keep exploring. Films also can bring us a different visual experience and happiness [unparalleled with visual experience ] .In conclusion, nowadays we can easily communicate information in more ways. It seems to me that books, radios, films are the most powerful and effective media for us because of their uniqueness.
March 5, 2020 at 8:12 amIn our daily life, people can communicate information through redundant media such as comics, cell phones, radios, books, movies and so on. All types of media for information interchange have their advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, films, books, radios are the most effective tools for conveying information among these six media.
On the one hand, books, radios, films have their disadvantages through comparison of their different ways of using. Reading books has less attraction to many people and probably requires a silent space. Radios are another useful media, however the contents of the radio are only part of the book. Listening to the radio also makes us hard to remember every detail when we are learning knowledge. Films are an audio-visual representation but sometimes bring wrong messages to us. For example, some movie characters are always smoking in films. It may cause the youth to imitate them smoking.
On the other hand, these three media also have their all-important advantages. Books are the most instructive media that help us to study. Reading books can also nourish our minds and give us a positive direction to expand our intellectual boundary. Listening to the radio of our mobil phone is a convenient way to gain information anywhere and anytime, especially while we’re driving or traveling. In the film, a movie director would mix different subjects and ingenious ideas in his movie for people to keep exploring. Films also can bring us a unparalleled with visual experience.
In conclusion, nowadays we can easily communicate information in more ways. It seems to me that books, radios, films are the most powerful and effective media for us because of their uniqueness.
March 10, 2020 at 1:49 amScore: 54
Final Revision
In our daily life, people can communicate information [wrong phrase ] through redundant [ wrong word]media such as comics, cell phones, radios, books, movies and so on. All types of media for information interchange have their advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, films, books, radios are the most effective tools for conveying information( among these six media) [ misplaced ].
On the one hand, books, radios, films have their disadvantages through [article error ]comparison of their different ways of using [ unclear ]. Reading books has less attraction to many people and probably requires a silent space. Radios are another useful media, [punctuation error ]however the contents of the radio are only part of the book. Listening to the radio also makes us [wrong word ] hard to remember every detail when we are learning knowledge. Films are an audio-visual representation but [ grammatical error concerning coordinating word ]sometimes bring wrong messages to us. For example, some movie characters are always smoking in films. It [unclear pronoun ] may cause the youth to imitate them smoking.
On the other hand, these three media also have their all-important advantages. Books are the most instructive media that help us to study. Reading books can also nourish our minds and give us a positive direction to expand our intellectual boundary. Listening to the radio of [wrong preposition ]our mobil [ spelling error ]phone is a convenient way to gain information anywhere and anytime, especially while we’re driving or traveling. In the film, a movie director would mix different subjects and ingenious ideas in his movie for people to keep exploring. Films also can bring us a [ article error ] unparalleled with visual experience [unclear ].
In conclusion, nowadays we can easily communicate information [repetition ]in more ways. [ lack connection from the prior sentence ]It seems to me that books, radios, films are the most powerful and effective media for us because of their uniqueness.
