Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(in words, pictures, music or film)in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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March 6, 2020 at 3:39 pm
Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(in words, pictures, music or film)in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Artists are usually more creative with strong personalities, therefore, they are not used to being restricted and are always eager to express freely. But basic restrictions are quite necessary for everyone including those artists.
Only if there are social principles equal to every citizen can our society be orderly and harmonious. As the saying goes, nothing can be accomplished without standards. Every organization has its rules. For example, a class need its regulations and every classmate need to obey the rules. Regulations seem more essential when it occurs to a company for the huger its scale is, the more important the restrictions are. Things apply to a government too. As a citizen regardless of the status, it’s our obligation to observe the government restrictions which has no exception to artists.
In terms of different cognitive level and understanding of different people, inappropriate and irregular expressions could mislead people in an unexpected way. A thousand people have a thousand Hamlet. If there is no restriction to enforce their expressions, some ideas may get misunderstood by their audience. Sometimes, maybe the artists wants to create a theme of school bullying, but the casual delivery can be simulated by immature children in the wrong way which is totally opposite to original intentions. Proper restrictions are indispensable thinking of both artists and audience.
Government restriction is compulsive but artists depending on their creation and imagination to build a magical world also need freedom to protect their continuous inspiration. The extent within which the restriction should be constrained is another problem need to be solved.
March 9, 2020 at 9:53 pmScore: 48.7
Issues:
- About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
March 10, 2020 at 4:08 amArtists are usually more creative, and they are not used to being restricted and are always eager to express in whichever way they want. But basic restrictions are quite necessary for everyone, including those artists.
Only if there are social principles equal to every citizen can our society be orderly and harmonious. As the saying goes, nothing can achieve without standards. Every organization has its rules. For example, a class requires its regulations, and every classmate need to obey the rules. Regulations seem more essential to a company because with large scale comes stricter restrictions. Things apply to a government too. As a citizen, regardless of the status or identity, it’s part of our obligation to observe the government restrictions which has no exception to artists.
In terms of cognitive ability and understanding of different people, inappropriate and irregular expressions could mislead people. A thousand people have a thousand Hamlet. If there is no restriction to enforce their ways of communicating, some ideas may get misunderstood by their audience. Perhaps, the artists create a theme of school bullying intending to prevent this behavior, but without rules to limit its format, some terrible plots may be simulated by immature children in the wrong way which is totally opposite to original intentions. Proper restrictions are indispensable thinking of both artists and readers.
Artists depending on their creation and imagination to build a magical world need freedom to protect their continuous inspiration. However, government restrictions are something they are always supposed to keep in mind.
March 17, 2020 at 2:35 amScore: 48.4
Issues:
- About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
