DIY留学商科申请套词信范文

  • QQ
    University: ocean university of china
    Nationality: china
    March 16, 2019 at 2:27 pm

    DIY留学商科申请套词信范文

    To the business school department,

    Thank you for the email of the decision. I really appreciate and will wait for the further respond truthfully.

    The book I recently read about Pixar emphasizes the importance of the management and environment on innovation and work. When people with enthusiasm work in the ideal place, they may have more chance to create masterpiece. So I hope that your department can consider about me again because the Imperial Business School is ideal place for my dream and passion. In addition, I want to contribute my thought and innovation to xx  School and the world.

    I tried my best to achieve my goal during the past three years in university, and I will do that all the way. So far, I have finished all the courses in my college and kept the score at 90. I am trying to improve my IETLS score and to gain more experience on marketing through FMCG internship.

    In addition, could I ask the reason why I was put on the waiting list because I really want to try my best to meet the need and high standard.

    Thank you again and look forward to good news.

    the reply from school:
    Dear ,
    Thank you for your email.
    We are still processing a large volume of applications; therefore strong applicants are moved onto the waiting list for further consideration. The waiting list is not ranked, and should positions open up then we will reassess all applicants on this list.

    At this stage, you we do not need any additional information or documents from you.

    Kind regards

    March 18, 2019 at 2:20 am

    It is an inappropriate reply letter.

    The Business Scholl already told you why you were put on the waitlist, so there is no need to dispute on this matter.

    It is a good point to indicate that you are working to improve your IELTS score, but no one is interested to hear ” you are trying to improve it.” Say something to prove that you have INDEED improved your English skills.

    The fact that you were put on the Waitlist confirms your eligibility for admission. So what you need to do is to draft a letter ” to move your position ahead” on the waitlist. Evidence of English skills improvement certainly helps; additionally, you should also analyze the program’s characteristics (what the program/school values most from students) and rewrite a litter to emphasize these characteristics that you have recently developed/enhanced.

    Good luck!

    Lin Qiu

    QQ
    University: ocean university of china
    Nationality: china
    March 18, 2019 at 3:05 am

    Thank you~

    Here are the inquiry letters and the URL of my programme.

    https://www.imperial.ac.uk/business-school/programmes/msc-strategic-marketing/study-programme/

    To the admissions department:

    Thank you for the email of the decision. I really appreciate and will wait for the further respond truthfully.

    The book I recently read about Pixar emphasizes the importance of the management and environment on innovation and work. When people with enthusiasm work in the ideal place, they may have more chance to create masterpiece. So I hope that your department can consider about me again because the Imperial Business School is ideal place for my dream and passion. In addition, I want to contribute my thought and innovation to Imperial College School and the world.

    I tried my best to achieve my goal during the past three years in university, and I will do that all the way. So far, I have finished all the courses in my college and kept the score at 90. I am trying to improve my Ielts score and to gain more experience on marketing through FMCG internship.

    Thank you again and look forward to good news.

    Regards

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