For the successful development government must spend money on young children than for university’s students

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  • wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    October 11, 2019 at 10:37 am

    Writing topic: For the successful development government must spend money on young children than for university’s students.

    We all agree that the future of a nation depends on its education industry. Yet there are different voices when it comes to the specific educational stage in which government should invest. Some people think that college education is more important to our country, because college students accept professional training and directly participate in the economic construction. From my perspective, the fundamental education should obtain more investment from government.

    Fundamental education is the very first stage when a child is about to accept the standard education. It refers to all the people in the society and affects everyone from the very beginning of their life. It’s crucial to everybody’s life; it helps young children build a systematic way to explore this world. By accepting the fundamental education with high quality, the children can realize the aspects which they have talent for and know the directions in their future life. For instance, a boy will never know his writing talent if he doesn’t have a writing class. A girl will never become a good singer if she doesn’t attend a music class. Spending more money on primary school teachers’ salary and the equipment is important. In this way we can hire more talented teachers to teach our kids.

    Besides, young children are more likely to get hurt in both physical and mental ways. Sometimes it can ruin a child’s life. That is why we need professional experts to take care of the children but not only to teach them scientific knowledge. Comparing to academic achievements, physical and mental health and finding the talent of every child are more important in the primary school stage and also in children’s whole life. The comprehensive development of children can subsequently assure civilian’s good personalities and ability to live a happy life.

    If the young children are educated properly, they will find their life path when they grow up.

    wendyliu
    University: TUC
    Nationality: China
    October 15, 2019 at 1:45 pm

    Look forward to your reply!