Some people believe that going to school early in the morning is good for students’ study. Other students want to start a day late in the morning. Which option do you agree with and why?

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  • Diaphanous722
    University: HKU
    Nationality: China
    December 13, 2020 at 6:33 am

    Some people believe that going to school early in the morning is good for students’ study. Other students want to start a day late in the morning. Which option do you agree with and why?

    As modern society becomes increasingly complicated, the competition between people has also becomes more intense. Since more efficiency learning provides students with valuable opportunities to be more competitive, it is considered that starting a day late helps students have a highly concentrated study with full energy. In my point of view, however, going to school early in the morning is good for students’ study.

    To begin with, going to school early makes it possible for students to have more gold time to study. To be specific, early school starts at 7:00 am, while late school starts at 10 am. Obviously, students in early school have three hours more than students in late school. Also, as we all know, people remember best in the morning. After a full night’s sleep, our mind is clear, thus it is the best time to read and memorize words. Then, in this period of time, student can read several good articles and memorize one unit of words, and adjust our mindset from being lazy to getting ready to study all day. It is a waste to use this period of gold time to sleep.

    Admittedly, starting a day late ensures students to have a nice rest and they will be full of energy in class. Not feeling sleepy is helpful to bring a good mood, which will reduce the interference to our study and thus improve the efficiency of class. However, since students do not need to get up early, they will choose to finish work at night and stay up late. It is a vicious circle, which exerts a negative effect on their health. But, going to school early will force students to maintain a disciplined lifestyle. The students had to get up early in the morning due to the school rule, and then in order to get enough sleep, students have to hurry up and finish the task quickly to go to bed earlier, which not only keep them fit, but also develop a beneficial habits to schedule time.

    In conclusion, going to school early in the morning is better.

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    University: University of Wisconsin
    December 13, 2020 at 3:13 pm

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