When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  • Matt
    University: KPU
    Nationality: Chinese
    February 17, 2020 at 9:49 pm

    When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    People always want more public facilities, such as parks, for communication and entertainment. However, when a city is newly built, shopping center is a more suitable option because building shopping centers would attracts more people to this city and increase the satisfaction of living standard which are both essential for a new town.

    Shopping centers drive people in a city. That is, if a city has a lot of shopping centers, people living in surrounding rural areas and small towns would love to move in. For example, if a new town is built with shopping centers, people who make living for their family on a farm or a low payed job in a small town would love to move in because they want to chase for the opportunity which allows better live to their families with enormous varies of products and decent salary. As a consequence, this city would receive a large increase of employment of moved in citizens.

    Shopping centers also increase the satisfaction of living standard in a city. This means that shopping center is also an appropriate place to have fun and communicate because a shopping center is supposed to have varies of areas that represent different functions. For instance, in a shopping mall, adults can go shopping and hang out, elders can talk and take walk, and children are allowed to enjoy playing at playing zones no matter of the weather. Therefore, shopping centers actually include the functions that other public areas can provide.

    To sum up, shopping mall is more essential for a government of a new town rather than public facilities since building shopping malls provides more products to consume, better job opportunities to lead people moving in and more varies of activities for consumers to hang out. In my opinion, the government should think of building parks or other pubic facilities only after they have enough population and most job demands are taken care of.

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