In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.

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  • NewLand
    University: HUST
    Nationality: CHINA
    February 19, 2022 at 5:21 pm

    In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.

    Working ethics for leadership have been an important issue. The duration of one’s term in critical positions has also become a heated topic. From my perspective. I agree that in general cases, those in power ought to step down after five years.

    Supporters of longer or eternal leadership claim that under the continuous command of certain outstanding people, the stability and sustainability of the enterprise will remain. Those in charge already possess a rather high level of talent and knowledge. With their longstanding service and unwavering course of career development, they would turn abundant experience into insight and courage in the face of impending challenges. With their time-honored service, they will acquire a sense of belonging to it, thus maintaining unwavering loyalty for their own cooperation and lofty aspirations for steady progress in spite of kaleidoscope circumstances.

    However, this has proven wrong especially in modern society. History has also shown us what’s more robust. Tito, the lifelong president of Yugaslovia has been an evident example. He fought against the fascists and built the new socialist federation, yet he failed to keep the political system secure and even-handed with concrete institutions. He simply pacified striking conflicts and suppressed those potential dissidents. After his death, his country soon went into catastrophic turmoil.

    In gross strokes it could be concluded that performance and survival of an enterprise ,institution and even government relies on these elements: alarcity, justice and accountability. When it comes to duration of power, too short terms would cause directors unable to push toward a single plan. We can’t expect a president would achieve anything worthwhile by sitting in the White House for a week, for it is quite complex to learn from precedents, discuss feasibility and attain universal support and oversee implementation. In fact, American presidents may have directed more structural changes instead of preparing for elections had their single term been one year longer.

    A term too long would also be prone to dictatorship and inefficiency. Unlimited terms for senior officers ,directors and executives can produce risks, because of dire lack of accountability. Malfeasance, nepotism and negligence of duties can occur uncontested, since almost everyone inside the institution has become accustomed to certain leadership and doesn’t dare or even be tempted to challenge it, despite their conscience. Since upward mobility is extremely limited, employees feel little impetus to devote themselves to the institution.

    In a nutshell, five years as a term is at present the most suitable and efficient to maintain the vitality and soundness of any institution. Since in the current society, five years is sufficient to witness substantial development while leaving space for future correction.

    February 20, 2022 at 2:56 am

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    NewLand
    University: HUST
    Nationality: CHINA
    February 20, 2022 at 8:51 am

    In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.

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    Working ethics for leadership have been an important issue. The duration of one’s term in critical positions has also become a heated topic. From my perspective. in general cases, those in power ought to step down after five years.

    Supporters of long-term leadership claim that under the continuous command of certain outstanding people, the stability and sustainability of the enterprise will remain. Those in charge already possess a high level of competence. With their longstanding service and unwavering course of career development, they would turn abundant experience into insight and courage in the face of impending challenges. They will also acquire a sense of belonging to it, thus maintaining unwavering loyalty and lofty aspirations for steady progress however kaleidoscopic circumstances are.

    However, this has been proved wrong especially in modern society, where elders’authority and fedual allegiance have diminished. History has also shown us what’s more robust. Tito, the lifelong president of Yugaslavia has been an evident example. He fought against the fascists and built the new socialist federation, yet he failed to keep the political system secure and even-handed with concrete institutions. He pacified striking conflicts and suppressed those potential dissidents, maintaing unity with his own charisma. After his death, his country soon went into catastrophic turmoil.

    In a holistic review of politics, it could be concluded that survival of an entity in any field-business,government-relies on these elements: progress, equity and accountability. Terms of office shouldn’t be so short that directors become powerless to push toward a single agenda. We can’t expect a president would instantly eliminate poverty, for it is quite complex to learn from precedents, discuss feasibility, attain universal support and oversee implementation. In fact, pundits in comparive politics have remarked that American presidents may have directed more structural changes instead of preparing for elections had their single term been one year longer.

    While a term too long would also be prone to dictatorship and inefficiency, five years as the term of office would reinforce checks and balances, building transparency and dialogues among stakeholders . Malfeasance, nepotism and negligence of duties would face thorough inspection and receive severe punishment, since no permanent authority of particular persons is allowed. Besides, limited term of office bring incentive for wholehearted devotion of the employees. Owing to upward mobility, employees feel propelled to serve in the best interest of the institution.

    In a nutshell, five years as the term is the most suitable and efficient to maintain the vitality and soundness of any institution. Since in the current society, five years is sufficient to witness substantial development while leaving space for future correction.

    February 21, 2022 at 3:40 am

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    In a holistic review of politics, it could be concluded that survival of an entity in any field-business,[spacing error   ] government-relies on these elements: progress, equity and accountability. Terms of office shouldn’t be so short that directors[ unclear word  ] become powerless to push toward a single agenda. We can’t expect a president would instantly eliminate poverty(, for[weak/unclear coordination conjunction   ] it is quite complex to learn from precedents, discuss feasibility, attain universal support and oversee implementation.)[wordy   ] In fact, pundits in comparive[ spelling error  ] politics have remarked that American presidents[ spelling error  ] may [ grammatical error  ] have directed[word choice   ] more structural changes[ unclear  ] instead of preparing for elections had their single term been one year longer.

    While a term too long would also be prone to dictatorship and inefficiency,[punctuation error   ] five years as the term of office would reinforce (checks and balances)[unclear   ] , building transparency and dialogues among stakeholders [ spacing error  ] . Malfeasance, nepotism and negligence of duties would face thorough inspection [ unclear  ] and receive severe punishment, [ punctuation error  ] since no permanent authority of particular persons is allowed. Besides, limited term of office bring [ grammatical error  ] incentive for wholehearted devotion of the[ article error  ] employees. Owing to upward mobility, employees feel propelled to serve in the best interest of the institution[unclear word   ] .

    In a nutshell, five years as the term[ unclear  ] is the most suitable and efficient to maintain the[ article error  ] vitality and soundness of any institution. Since in [ In  ] the current society, five years is sufficient to witness substantial development while leaving space for future correction.

    February 27, 2022 at 4:12 pm

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