In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.

TOEFL Writing Topic: In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.

Gaining knowledge plays an important role in people’s everyday live, especially for our students. However, is it really necessary for us to acquire knowledge in a great number of areas to become a generalist? though some people may argue that if we don’t have knowledge in that many subjects, we will lose the merits in the job market in the future or cannot get the advance in academy score. As far as I’m concerned, being a specialist is better our self-development and the reasons are as follows.

As far as we all knows, students have heavy burdens at school that more often than not, they feel fatigued or even worn out because of too much homework, which effects their physical health a lot. What we should do is to rescue them from the mountain of books and guide them to participate in various kinds of outdoors activities. Nevertheless, getting a good command of several subjects often means more classes and assignments, which do no good to students’ health.In the end, the student have to stay up late and give up their free time to meet their teachers’ standard, and that lead to a higher rate of near-sight and other kinds of illnesses.

What’s worse, cannot specialize in one subject means university students feel hard to adapt to society. I always see eye to eye to a view that university graduates are considered as fresh troop marching into the society, some of whom may become the main contributors to a better world. Therefore, if students don’t have a unique skill to serve more people or build more things, what is the social usage of the university?I have asked an HR in a company and he told me that nowadays, many graduates are not competitive in most of the positions and their employers must hire extra teachers to teach them, which they ought to be taught in the university, and the education cost a large amount of money. This make me think that school should take the responsibility to help students hone their skills.