In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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  • John117
    University: Lanzhou university
    Nationality: China
    June 14, 2022 at 3:10 pm

    In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

    In certain cultural background, people are fond of telling children that they can do anything just try hard enough.This kind of words always used as encouragement, and of course useful in a certain degree.But the questions come as followed should not be neglect too.

    Talking to advantage, initiate young generations with the kind of words like “you can be anything you want” is a effective approach to build up their self confidence and strengthen their willing of persistence.Children who receiving this kind of education may grow to be confident and willing to challenge task that seem out of reach in others perspective, and these qualities are what we need in our future lives, it’s no doubt that we may raise it up in their childhood. All of those will benefit them a lot in their study, work, and even achieving their dream.

    But there are voices argue that this heart-stirring words are not practical which may give an illusion to the children and make them miss the proper chance of giving up, unreasonable persisitence will be detrimental in many occasions. Children who be educated to be always persistent to a certain goal may ignore the danger arouse and find risking their health and safety for it.

    I’m also concerning of the possibility that children will lose creativity and flexible thinking toward problems. When we solve certain problems, persistence is necessary, but an effective apprach plays a role just like our mind of keeping up.If we just teach children to be condifent and concentrate while casting how to find a right way to achieve our goal away, it will definiently do harm to them someday.

    In conclusion, of course teach children to be willing to challenge difficulty and persistent is important, but we should always keep in mind that it also got negative effect, like losing creativity of finding ways to solve problems.

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    June 15, 2022 at 8:18 pm

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    John117
    University: Lanzhou university
    Nationality: China
    June 16, 2022 at 5:06 am

    In plenty of cultural backgrounds, people are fond of telling children that they can do anything, and only needs you to try hard enough.These kinds of words usually used as encouragement, and of course, useful in a certain degree. But the questions come as follows should not be neglected too.

    Talking to advantage, initiate young generations with the kind of words like “you can be anything you want” is a effective approach to build up their self confidence and strengthen their willing of persistence.Children who received this kind of education may grow to be confident and willing to challenge tasks that seem out of reach in others’ perspective, and these qualities are what we need in the future lives, It’s no doubt that we may raise it up in their childhood. All of those will benefit them a lot in their study, work, and even achieving their dreams.

    But there are voices argued that these upward words are not practical and may give an illusion to the children and make them miss the proper chance of giving up, unreasonable persistence will be detrimental many occasions. Children who been educated to be always persistent to a certain goal may ignore the potential danger and find risking their health and safety for it.

    I’m also concerned about the possibility that children will lose creativity and flexible thinking toward problems. When we solve certain problems, persistence is necessary, but an effective approach plays a role just like our mind of keeping up. If we just teach children to be confident and concentrate while casting how to find right ways to achieve our goal away, it will someday do harm to themselves.

    In conclusion, of course teaching children to be willing to challenge difficulty and persistence is important, but we should always keep in mind that it also got negative influence, like losing creativity of finding ways to solve problems.

    June 20, 2022 at 8:32 pm

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    John117
    University: Lanzhou university
    Nationality: China
    June 21, 2022 at 12:46 am

     

    In plenty of cultural backgrounds, people are fond of telling children that they can do everything, and only needs to try hard enough. These kinds of words usually used to encourage, and of course, useful in a certain degree. But the questions come as follows shall not be neglected too.

    Talking to advantage, encourage young generations with the kind words like “you can be everything you want” is an effective approach to build up their self-confidence and strengthen their willing of persistence. Children who receive this kind of education may grow to be confident and willing to challenge tasks that seem out of reach in others’ perspectives, and these qualities are what we need in our future lives, There is no doubt that we may raise it up in their childhood. All of those will benefit them a lot in their study, work, and even achieve their dreams.

    But there are voices argue that these upward words are not practical and may give an illusion to the children and make them miss the proper chance of giving up, excessive efforts will be detrimental in many occasions. Children who educated to be always persistent and fixed on a certain goal may ignore the potential danger and find risking their health and safety for it.

    I’m also concerned about the possibility that children will lose creativity and flexible thinking toward problems. When we solve certain problems, persistence is necessary, but an effective approach plays a role just like our mind to keep up. If we only teach children to be confident and concentrate while casting how to find appropriate ways to achieve our goal away, it will someday do harm to themselves.

    In conclusion, although teaching children to be willing to challenge difficulty and persistence is important, but we should still keep in mind that it also got negative outcome, like losing creativity in finding ways to solve problems.

     

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    John117
    University: Lanzhou university
    Nationality: China
    June 22, 2022 at 7:03 am

    In plenty of cultural backgrounds, people are fond of telling children that they can achieve anything, and only needs to try hard enough. These kinds of words are usually used to encourage children, and of course, useful in a certain degree. But the questions come as follows shall not be neglected too.

    Talking to advantage, encouraging young generations with the kind words like “you can be everything you want” is an effective approach to build up their self-confidence and strengthen their willing to persistence. Children who receive this kind of education may grow to be confident and willing to challenge tasks that seem out of reach in others’ perspectives, and these qualities are what we need in our future lives, There is no doubt that we may raise it up in their childhood. All of those will benefit them a lot in their study, work, and even achieve their dreams.

    But there are voices say that these upward words are not practical and may give an illusion to the children and make them miss the proper chance of giving up,  too much effort will be detrimental. Children who educate to be always persistent and fixed on a certain goal may ignore the potential danger and find risking their health and safety for it.

    I’m also concerned about the possibility that children will lose creativity and flexible thinking toward problems. When we solve certain problems, persistence is necessary, but an effective approach plays a role just like our mind to keep up. If we only teach children to be confident and concentrate while casting how to find appropriate ways to achieve our goal away, it will someday do harm to themselves.

    In conclusion, although teaching children to be willing to challenge difficulty and persistence is important, we should still keep in mind that it also got negative outcomes, like losing creativity in finding ways to solve problems.

    June 22, 2022 at 1:31 pm

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    John117
    University: Lanzhou university
    Nationality: China
    June 22, 2022 at 2:21 pm

    In plenty of cultural backgrounds, people are fond of telling children that they can achieve all, and only needs to try hard enough. These kinds of words are usually used to encourage youngster, and of course, useful to a certain degree. But the questions come as follows shall not be neglected too.

    Talking to advantage, encouraging young generations with the kind words like “you can be everything you want” is an effective approach to build up their self-confidence and strengthen their willingness to be persistent. Children who receive this kind of education may grow to be confident and willing to challenge tasks that seem out of reach in others’ perspectives, and these qualities are what we need in our future lives. There is no doubt that we may raise it up in their childhood. All of those will benefit them a lot in their study, work, and even achieve their dreams.

    But there are voices arguing that these upward words are not practical and may give an illusion to the children and make them miss the proper chance of giving up,and this excessive effort will be detrimental. Children who educate to be always persistent and fixed on a certain goal may ignore the potential danger and find risking their health and safety for it.

    I’m also concerned about the possibility that children will lose creativity and flexible thinking toward problems. When we solve certain problems, persistence is necessary, but an effective approach plays a role just like our mind to keep up. If we only teach children to be confident and concentrate while casting how to find appropriate ways to achieve our goal away, it will someday do harm to themselves.

    In conclusion, although teaching children to be willing to challenge difficulty and persistence is important, we should still keep in mind that it also got negative outcomes, like losing creativity in finding ways to solve problems.

    June 24, 2022 at 2:19 pm

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    Talking to advantage, encouraging young generations with the kind words like “you can be everything you want” is an effective approach to build up their self-confidence and strengthen their willingness to be persistent. Children who receive this kind of education may grow to be confident and willing to challenge tasks that seem out of reach in others’ perspectives, and these qualities are what we need in our future lives. There is no doubt that we may raise it up in their childhood. All of those will benefit them a lot in their study, work, and even achieve their dreams.

    But there are voices arguing that these upward words are not practical and may give an illusion to the children and make them miss the proper chance of giving up,and this excessive effort will be detrimental. Children who educate to be always persistent and fixed on a certain goal may ignore the potential danger and find risking their health and safety for it.

    I’m also concerned about the possibility that children will lose creativity and flexible thinking toward problems. When we solve certain problems, persistence is necessary, but an effective approach plays a role just like our mind to keep up. If we only teach children to be confident and concentrate while casting how to find appropriate ways to achieve our goal away, it will someday do harm to themselves.

    In conclusion, although teaching children to be willing to challenge difficulty and persistence is important, we should still keep in mind that it also got negative outcomes, like losing creativity in finding ways to solve problems.

    June 24, 2022 at 2:53 pm

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