In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

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  • Mia MEI
    University: Shanghai Lixin
    Nationality: China
    November 22, 2019 at 2:11 am

    In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

    It is true that many people in some parts of the world still suffer from femine regardless of the agricultural development.

    Many reasons are responsible for such situation. First of all, the population density is very high in some parts of the world, so it is difficult for those people to rely on the limited tillable lands. Secondly, some areas in the world are so underdevelpoed and isolated that they can not keep in touch with the outer world. As a result, they cannot learn thr advanced technology from developed countries ,which causes the remaining low harvest. Thirdly, the situation in some countries is not suitable for feeding the populace. For example, there are still some places suffering from continuous wars which cause large cost in the field of military. Also, human activities have causes lots of environmental problems which make the drop of harvest on the land. For instance, over-exploitation is one of the reason for land degradation.

    To solve such problems, the isolated countries should try to contact with the world and learn the state-of-the-art technology in farming. Secondly, international aid should be offered by both international organizations and developed countries to narrow the large gaps. Thirdly, citizens who live in extreme surroundings can immigrate to other countries to survive. Last but not least, human beings should pay attention to the environment and take actions to protect our nature and use soil resources rationally.

    In conclusion,with the cooperation among human beings all around the world, this problem can be solved effectively.

    January 3, 2020 at 2:18 am

    I will work on this essay after you complete the revision of the other one. Regards.