In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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July 5, 2020 at 12:49 am
In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the era of booming portable online devices, online readable materials tend to attract more and more people due to their access without payment. Thus, it seems that no one is willing to purchase printed reading materials anymore.
Indeed, it is reasonable to do so. As the wide spread of internet supported devices such as mobile-phones, laptops, and kindle, people can download the e-books they want and read it everywhere at any time. Besides, the developing information technology and new trend of 5G technology make it easier to browse internet. To attract new customers and to retain loyalty customers, publishers also tend to offer free online access to the public. As a result, there will be no need to pay for the printed newspapers or books for most people.
However, it does not mean that everything people want can be got freely. For example, the research reports which require huge costs, academic intelligence, or devotion of researchers’ groups will still be charged. Besides, there will still be many fans of printed materials such as the olds. Due to the fact that they are losing learning abilities as well as not able to fit for the new reading methods. Moreover, printed reading materials is quite good for health because of the avoiding of radiation or degeneration of eye sights. Thus, there still be a huge market for printed materials.
To conclude, both the portable devices and the printed materials have their own advantages and targeted customers. The number of one part may change to the other but it does not mean that one will be totally replaced costless.
July 6, 2020 at 11:13 pmScore: ungraded
Issues:
- About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- Vague introductory paragraph. Rewrite the first paragraph and present a clear thesis in DIRECT response to the prompt.
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July 7, 2020 at 9:25 amIn the era of booming portable online devices, online readable materials tend to attract more people due to their access without payment. Thus, it seems that no one is willing to purchase printed reading materials anymore.
Indeed, it is reasonable to do so. With the speeding up usage of internet-supported devices such as mobile-phones, laptops, and kindle, people can download and read the e-books they want everywhere at any time. Besides, the developing information technology and 5G technology as a new trend make it easier to browse the Internet. To attract new customers and to retain loyal customers, publishers also tend to offer free online access to the public. As a result, there will be no need to pay for printed newspapers or books for most people.
However, it does not automatically mean that everything people want should be free. For example, the research reports which require huge costs, academic intelligence, or devotion of researchers’ groups need to be charged. Besides, there will remain many fans of printed materials such as the olds due to the fact that they are losing learning abilities as well as not able to fit for the new reading methods. Moreover, printed reading materials is quite good for health because of the avoiding of radiation or degeneration of eye sights. Thus, there still be a huge market for printed materials.
To conclude, both portable devices and printed materials have their own merits. The decline of one part may lead to the increase of the other but neither will be totally replaced costless.
July 9, 2020 at 1:44 amIn the era of booming (portable online devices)[ unclear ], online[ repetition ] readable materials tend to attract more people due to their[ unclear pronoun ] access (without payment)[wordy ]. Thus, it seems that no one is willing to purchase printed reading materials anymore. [ missing thesis in the first paragraph ]
Indeed, (it is reasonable to do so)[ unclear ]. With the (speeding up)[ word form error ] usage of [article error ]internet-supported devices such as mobile-phones[spelling error ], laptops, and kindle, people can download and read the e-books they want everywhere at any time. Besides, the developing[word form error ] information technology and 5G technology as a new trend make[grammatical error ] it easier to browse the Internet[ inconsistency in upper/lower case word ]. To attract new customers and to retain loyal customers, publishers also (tend to)[ repetition ] offer free online access to the public. As a result, there will be no need to pay for printed newspapers or books for most people.
However, it[unclear pronoun ] does not automatically mean that everything people want should be free. For example, (the research reports which require huge costs, academic intelligence, or devotion of researchers’ groups)[unclear ] need to be charged[ passive ]. Besides, (there will remain)[ grammatical error ] many fans of[ incorrect preposition ] printed materials (such as the olds)[ unclear] (due to the fact that)[wordy ] (they are losing learning abilities as well as not able to)[unparalelled ] fit for the new reading methods. Moreover, printed reading materials is [grammatical error ]quite (good for)[ vague and dull ] health because of the (avoiding of radiation or degeneration of eye sights)[ unclear ]. Thus, there still be a huge market for printed materials.
To conclude, both (portable devices and printed materials)[ unparalleled ] have their own merits. The decline of one part [ wrong word ]may lead to the increase of the other [ grammatical error ]but neither will be totally replaced costless[ grammatical error ].
July 9, 2020 at 3:58 amIn the era of booming portable electronics, online readable materials tend to attract more people due to the extensive access. Thus, it seems that no one is willing to purchase printed reading materials anymore. I disagree with this idea.
Indeed, it is reasonable to think there is no need to pay for reading materials. With the speeding up of internet-supported devices usage such as mobile phones, laptops, and kindle, people can download and read the e-books they want everywhere at any time. Besides, the development of information technology and 5G technology as a new trend makes it easier to browse the Internet. To attract new customers and to get competitive advantage, publishers tend to offer free online access to the public. As a result, there will be no need to pay for most of the printed newspapers or books.
However, it does not automatically mean that free access will absolutely take all the shows of reading materials. For example, researchers should charge to get the investment back, or it is a waste of their academic intelligence and research devotion. In addition, there will be many people remain to be fans for printed materials, the olds, for instance. Because they may feel difficult to keep pace with the developing era. Some of them may hold the view that printed reading materials do not have radiation, thus protecting vision and brain. As far as I am concerned, there still be a huge market for printed materials with the coming of an aging society.
To conclude, although the number of people in favor of portable reading devices may increase, printed materials will never be replaced.
July 11, 2020 at 3:14 amIn the era of booming portable electronics, online readable materials tend to attract more people due to the extensive access. Thus, it seems that no one is willing to purchase printed reading materials anymore. I disagree with this idea.
Indeed, it is reasonable to think there is no need to pay for reading materials. With the
speeding up[ increasing usage ] of internet-supported devicesusagesuch as mobile phones, laptops, and kindle, people can download and read the e-books they want everywhere at any time. Besides, the development of informationtechnologyand 5Gtechnology[ technologies ] as a new trend makes it easier to browse the Internet. To attract new customers and to get [ a ] competitive advantage, publishers tend to offer free online access to the public. As a result, there will be no need to pay for most of the printed newspapers or books.However, it does not automatically mean that free access will absolutely
(take all the shows)[ unclear ] of[ replace ] reading materials. For example, researchers should charge to get the investment back, or it is a waste of their academic intelligence and research devotion. In addition, there will be many people remain [ grammatical error ] to be fans for printed materials,( the olds, for instance)[ unclear ] . Because they may feel difficult to keep pace with the developing era[grammatical error ] . Some of them[ unclear pronoun ] may holdthe viewthat printed reading materials do not have radiation, thus protecting vision and brain. As far as I am concerned, there still be a huge market for printed materials with the coming of an aging society.To conclude, although the number of people in favor of portable reading devices may increase, printed materials will never be replaced.
