In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.

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  • icepear
    University: USTC
    Nationality: China
    March 24, 2020 at 3:23 am

    In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.

    There is a public discussion nowadays about whether young people today are more independent to make decisions than those in the past. In my opinion, the young today are more decisive when they face choices. Here are two reasons to support my perspective.

    Firstly, thanks to the fast development of education, young people nowadays are more likely to get high-quality education. The governments of many countries have implemented a large number of policies to support students. For example, the government of China spends billions on education every year. With those large number of money, Chinese students don’t need to pay much on their tuition because the major part of school fee is waived. Nearly every teenager can receive high-quality education today. Thus, they have richer knowledge than youngests in the past. As we all know, knowledge helps people make wiser decisions, and young people are better able to make a long-term plan for their lives.

    What’s more, young people now can collect more informations from the Internet to help their decisions. Many experts share their advices and experiences on the Internet. With the help of search engines like Google, youths of today can easily get useful information from the Internet. Besides, if there are no relevent results, people can submit a question on some websites or forums. Within one day, others will know your trouble and try to solve your question. The development of information technology really improves the propagation of knowledge. Helps from the other side of the Internet make young people more decisive to make a decision. However, in the past, people didn’t have such a convient way to get information. With limited knowledge, they were unable to make decisions by themselves, so they had to depend on their parents.

    In conclusion, better education and the Internet significantly enrich young people’s knowledge and outlook. Contemporary yougests can make decisions on their own insted of depending on their parents.

    March 24, 2020 at 3:40 am

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    icepear
    University: USTC
    Nationality: China
    April 6, 2020 at 7:58 am

    There is a public discussion nowadays about whether young people today are more independent in making decisions than those in the past. In my opinion, the young today are more decisive when they face choices. Here are two reasons to support my perspective.

    Firstly, thanks to the fast development of education, young people nowadays are more likely to get a high-quality education. The governments of many countries have implemented a large number of policies to support students. For example, the government of China spends billions on education every year. With those large number of money, Chinese students don’t need to pay much on their tuition because the main part of the school fee is waived. Nearly every teenager can receive a high-quality education today. Thus, they have richer knowledge than youngsters in the past. As we all know, knowledge helps people make wiser decisions, and be better able to make a long-term plan for their lives.

    What’s more, young people now can collect more information from the Internet to help their decisions. Many experts share their advice and experiences on the Internet. With the help of search engines like Google, youths of today can easily get useful information from the Internet. Besides, if there are no relevant results, people can submit a question on some websites or forums. Within one day, others will know your trouble and try to solve your problem. The development of information technology improves the propagation of knowledge. Helps from the other side of the Internet make young people more decisive to make a decision. However, in the past, people didn’t have such a convenient way to get information. With limited knowledge, they were unable to make decisions by themselves, so they had to depend on their parents.

    In conclusion, better education and the Internet significantly enrich young people’s knowledge and outlook. Contemporary youngsters can make decisions on their own instead of depending on their parents.