Inappropriate Statement of Purpose

  • Administrator
    University: University of Wisconsin
    September 22, 2019 at 3:07 am

    Inappropriate Statement of Purpose

    The Chinese economy has developed rapidly in the past few decades, and the manufacturing industry has also flourished. However, this progress has not brought about the same speed of mechanical core technology improvement. China is still far behind the leading countries in the industrial and mechanical fields. This is also one of the reasons why I hope to continue my studies in the field of machinery. I feel that I have the responsibility to make efforts for the progress of the Chinese machinery industry.

    [This Statement of Purpose (or Personal Statement) writing style is inappropriate.]