Integrated writing (School Unifom)

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    University: Guangzhou University
    Nationality: China
    October 17, 2020 at 8:52 am

    The reading passage completely refates the lecture.
    It’s said in the lecture that school uniform are sold in the specific stroe usually and students need to buy some fasionable cloths if the have a date with their friends after school which cause the cloth cost increasing.However, the reading passage said if school don’t require students wear uniform,it will make students wear fasionable cloths that are usually expensive,and it will cause some financial stress to the students who can not pay for the fasionable cloths.
    Contrary to the belief in the says that wear uniform can elinimate the self consciousness and discomfortable between students which can lead to emotional stress, the proferssor says that students always have some emotional stress whenever they are.
    And the lecture refutes the fact that if student who wears different from others or can not afford the same cost cloth,will get bulling and teasing.In fact,bulling and teasing exsit everywhere,especially among the teeneage.
    Professor also offer a differernt opinion that even if students wear the same uniform at school,they will compare the other things,like the bag you wear,or the music you hear.
    Therefore the lecture completely argues aganist the reading passage.

    October 19, 2020 at 3:43 pm

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