Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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March 30, 2020 at 1:02 am
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
How to deal with adverse situations has become a universal concern to many. Some people insist that they should adapt to them while others hold that it is better to change bad situations. Generally, I believe that people should try to improve bad circumstances.
Staying in a bad situation for a long time will cause detrimental effects to people’s career prospects. Bad conditions such as a boring job or low wages may hit employees’ morale. Their productivity will come down. As a result, employees may be fired in face of intense competition.
It is easy to notice that some may accept unfortunate situations instead of changing them. It is imaginable that people will invest more time, energy and money when they try to improve them . But the fact shows that far from improving bad cases, measures taken by people makes things worse.
Nevertheless, I think a good attitude towards terrible conditions is to change them. For instance, if people were short of cash, they would think of ways to make money like part-time jobs. Otherwise, they may always be short of money.
To conclude, people will always stay in bad situations unless they take actions.
March 31, 2020 at 2:21 amScore: 70.8
How to deal with adverse situations has become a universal [ incorrect word ] concern to many. Some people insist that they should adapt to them[unclear pronoun/could refer to people/situations ] while others hold that it is better to change bad situations. Generally, I believe that people should try to improve[wrong word ] bad circumstances.
[ missing transitory word ]Staying in a bad situation for a long time will[absolute statement ] cause detrimental effects to people’s career prospects[ wordy]. Bad conditions such as a boring job or low wages may hit employees’ morale. [ missing transitory word/ or choppy sentence/combine with the prior sentence ]Their productivity will come down. As a result, employees may be fired[passive ] in [ article error ]face of intense competition.
It is easy to notice that some may accept unfortunate situations instead of changing them. It is imaginable that people[ absolute ] will [ absolute ]invest more time, energy and money when they try to improve them[ unclear pronoun ] . But the fact shows that far from improving bad cases, measures taken by people[ absolute ] makes things worse.
Nevertheless, I think a good attitude towards terrible conditions is to change them. For instance, if people were short of cash, they would think of ways to make money like part-time jobs[ logically confusing/can part-time job makes money? ]. Otherwise, they may always be short of money.
To conclude, people will always[absolute statement ] stay in bad situations unless they take actions.
[Summary: try to use more conditional words instead of absolute words.]
