It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.

Some people think that specializing in a specific subject would be better than having broad knowledge. It’s hard to deny that specializing in a specific subject could [ help one to ] make progress in a specific field more easily, [ punctuation error ] But in my opinion, I don’t agree( it’s better)[repetition  ] to specialize in just one subject. (I will support my opinion on two dimensions.)[be specific  ]

[ Missing transition word ] Having broad knowledge could make[  vague word][ can allow ] us [ to ] adapt to society efficiently[ wrong word ] . With broad knowledge, we could deal with a series of problems.[ lacking evidence support ]

[ Missing transitory word ] Broad knowledge enables us to behave[ perform ] better in different aspects, which means we can fit in various positions. It[ unclear pronoun ] ’s not uncommon to meet some questions that we don’t good at[grammatical error  ] , but if we have [  had] some basic idea about them, then we can [would be able to  ] fix them (in an interdisciplinary way efficaciously)[ unclear ] .[  punctuation error] And in society, have diverse knowledge from diverse[repetition  ] subjects indicating versatility and multiple functions[ grammatical error ] . Therefore, we are more competitive than others in searching for a good job.

Secondly, learning broad subjects it’s [  grammatical error] a prerequisite to specializing in one specific subject. Admittedly, almost every subject is more or less related to each other. We will find out if we specialize in one subject to some degree, [ punctuation error  ]we need the knowledge to come from other subjects. For example, biologists always know a lof knowledge of chemistry,[  sweeping statement ][ punctuation error  ] because they [ unclear pronoun  ]are tightly related, and chemists always [sweeping statement   ]know about physics just the same as the relation between biology and chemistry. There have not [grammatical error   ]so many independent subjects like today in ancient[  unclear ]. All the scholars l[ sweeping statment  ]earn about philosophy, not the meaning of philosophy present today[ unclear  ], [ punctuation error  ]it’s a matter of all the scientific subjects combination[ unclear  ]. [  punctuation error ]And all the scientists with some accomplishments today, just like the ancient scholar, have to learn knowledge more than one specific subject[ sweeping/unclear sentence  ]. [  punctuation error ]So it’s not hard to tell the importance of having a broad knowledge.

To sum up, having broad knowledge could make[ word choice problem  ] more chances for us,[ punctuation error  ] And specialization on a specific point necessitates the accumulation of broad knowledge. [ punctuation error  ]So to have broad knowledge it’s better than specializing in one specific subject[ unclear  ].