Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you’re younger than when you are older. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you’re younger than when you are older. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  • Cillian.Diao
    University: BIT
    Nationality: CHINA
    October 29, 2020 at 2:45 pm

    <span lang=”EN-US”><span style=”color: #000000; font-family: 等线;”>Travelling abroad might be dream of many people since they want to know how the people look like, how the foreign language sound like and how the cultures are different in another country. Some claim that it is better to travel abroad at a young age than at an old age. I agree with the statement.</span></span>

     

    <span lang=”EN-US”><span style=”color: #000000; font-family: 等线;”> </span></span><span lang=”EN-US”><span style=”color: #000000; font-family: 等线;”>Travelling abroad can make the young build their dreams. By seeing a very different environment, some kind of seed could be planted into the young’s head. It could be a dream of living in a foreign country, a thought of making more money to travel abroad often, a notion of learning more about other religions. All the things a person see and experience in a foreign environment, like cultures, customs, ways of living and ways of thinking, could bring some positive effects to the person. And this is paramount for young people, because they still have enough time and opportunity than the old to fight for whatever they want.</span></span>

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    <span lang=”EN-US”><span style=”color: #000000; font-family: 等线;”>Young ones can learn more than old ones when travel abroad. Because young people tend to be more willing to accept new things. When old people come across with new things or ideas, they may be persistent. They tend to use their own experiences and knowledge to judge things, and they are faithful to their own thoughts. So it is hard for them to absorb and accept new things. But young people are often attracted to new notions, and they are willing to accept those things because their own mindset is not completely mature. So as a result, they can learn more than the old.</span></span>

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    <span lang=”EN-US”><span style=”color: #000000; font-family: 等线;”>To put it in a nutshell, young people are more energetic to face the difficulties, more likely to build their own dreams and more acceptable to different thoughts when they travel abroad, so it is justify to say that travelling at a young age is better than at an old age.</span></span>

    November 2, 2020 at 9:21 pm

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