It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good b

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  • Quaint
    University: Guangdong Ocean University
    Nationality: China
    November 19, 2022 at 8:38 am

    Children needs to be well-cultivated and educated, becase it’s a key session of growing to be an adult. In this period, children will make mistakes unavaiodably, there is a doubt weather parents and teachers should punish childrens.

    Personal development should be first considered when treating children. The ability to judge right and wrong is an essential skill for growing children, and it also means a lot for the right develop direction for children. For example, a student cheated in a school math exam so that he achieved a great point. Being known by other children and teacher, to punish this student may effective in reminding other students of the serious of cheating and telling them it’s obvious wrong. The child himself would avoid it after, and other students would not cheat under the fear. So by punishing, two important things are achieved: to help distingction, and to correct others.

    Other people may say, punishment may inspire the opposite mental of children, I’m disagree with this. My point is, parents and teachers should take actions toward wrong actions, that is to punish. The opposite mental may becase the punishment is too over, to avoid this, parents and teacher can be more careful upon the mental and moral healthy of children, but this doesn’t means not to punish, but to choose right punishment.

    Parents and teachers may take these punishment to teach good behaviors. First of all, they can reduce the praise to children, it’s called opposite-inspire in Human Mental, by which childrens may not easy to feel angry, and would perform better to get award.

    All in all, punishment should be taken to teach good behavior to children by distinction and correction, base on carefully-chosed punish-methods.

    Quaint
    University: Guangdong Ocean University
    Nationality: China
    November 19, 2022 at 8:39 am

    Here’s the full-title:

    It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.

    To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

    What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.