Kids are more influenced by their teachers than by their parents.

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  • Olivia …
    University: central south university
    Nationality: China
    February 29, 2020 at 1:22 pm

    Kids are more influenced by their teachers than by their parents.

    As a human being, things that we have experience and people who we have met have no doubt contribute to our whole life. I have to say parents play an important role in our daily lives. Compared with teachers, It is parents that company with us at every critic point of our life.

    At the begining of life, parents passed down genes and gave our birth. Sharing DNA with parents, it is imperative to influence their children from genetical aspects. To illustrate, your eyes may be a copy of your mother, your nose might come from your father, or your ears resemble your mother or father and so forth. Thus, no matter whether you agree or not, you are the reproduction of parents and are affected deeply.

    During the long life journey, kids are learning parents’ behaviors and imitating them. Parents are kids’ first teachers. Definitely, kids are good students who will absorb anything parents present before them. If parents read books after a dinner, kids will imitate them and hold a book despite they are illiterate. It is meaningful for them to become used to reading and doing homework after starting school life. However, from opposite ways, parents’ bad habits will also expand influence to children. Some parents like smoking and don’t care if having kids playing around them. So their children are more likely to enjoy smoking at the early age since their parents behave a “good” model.

    Therefore, it is time for teachers to play their role in school. Professional teachers will teach students classify the good and evil, the wax and wane, the beauty and ugliness. The systematic educations give kids overall development. At a certain extent, I admit that the role of teachers can’t be replaced by parents. Instructors avoid some drawbacks caused by parents, such as cosseting kids and being biased.

    It is hard to say which one, parents or teachers, influence most on children. From whole lives of human beings, parents’ effect outweigh the influence of teachers.

    March 6, 2020 at 10:18 pm

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    Olivia …
    University: central south university
    Nationality: China
    March 7, 2020 at 9:26 am

    As a human being, things that we have experienced and people who we have met contribute to our life. Without a doubt, parents play an essential role in our daily lives. Compared with teachers, It is parents that company with us at each crucial point of life.

    At the beginning of life, parents passed down genes and gave kids’ lives, which influenced offspring on genetic aspects. To illustrate, your eyes might copy from your mother, your nose might come from your father, or your ears resemble your mother or father and so forth. Thus, no matter whether you agree or not, parents affect their kids deeply.

    During the long life journey, kids are learning parents’ behaviors and imitating them. Parents are kids’ first teachers. Kids will absorb anything parents present before them. If parents usually read books, kids will imitate them and hold a book despite they are illiterate. Little kids will become used to reading and doing homework while enrolled in school. However, parents’ bad habits will also seduce children. Some parents enjoy smoking and don’t care if kids stay around them. So their children might be able to smoke at the early age since their parents behave as a “good” model.

    Therefore, it is time for teachers to play their role in schools. Professional teachers will lead students to classify the good and evil, the wax and wane, the beauty and ugliness. The systematic educations help students obtain an overall development. At this certain point, parents fail to replace teachers. Instructors are able to offset some problems caused by parents, such as cosseting kids and being biased.

    Regarding above issues, parents have to cooperate with teachers to help kids avoid these situations. Thus, I think kids can’t lose any part when growing up. But, from whole lives of human beings, parents’ effect outweigh the influence of teachers.

    March 12, 2020 at 3:30 am

    Ungraded

    I will not work on your essay before you fix A. all the dangling sentences; B. shift of person

    Dangling Examples:

    1. As a human being, things that …. Things are not a human being;
    2. Compared with teachers, It… It cannot be compared with teachers;

    Shift of person:

    1. your eyes might copy from your mother, your ….You used 3rd person, then you changed to the 2nd person. Remain consistent.
    Olivia …
    University: central south university
    Nationality: China
    March 12, 2020 at 7:21 am

    As a human being, things that we have experienced and people who we have met contribute to our life. Without a doubt, parents play an essential role in our daily lives. Compared with teachers, parents company with us at each crucial point of life.

    At the beginning of life, parents passed down genes and gave kids’ lives, which influenced offspring on genetic aspects. To illustrate, people inherit from their parents many of their physical characteristics, like their eyes might copy from their mother or their ears come from their father and so forth. Thus, no matter whether people agree or not, parents affect their kids deeply.

    During the long life journey, kids are learning parents’ behaviors and imitating them. Parents are kids’ first teachers. Kids will absorb anything parents present before them. For instance, if parents usually read books, kids will be more likely to imitate them and hold a book despite that they are illiterate. Little kids will become used to reading and doing homework while enrolled in school. However, parents’ bad habits will also seduce children. Some parents enjoy smoking and don’t care if there are kids around them. So their children might be able to learn this behavior and smoke at the early age.

    Therefore, it is time for teachers to play their role in schools. Professional teachers will lead students to classify the good and evil, the wax and wane, the beauty and ugliness. The systematic educations help students obtain an overall development. Thus, kids will realize what they should not do and what they could do. Instructors are able to offset some problems caused by parents, such as cosseting kids and spoiling their children. At this certain point, parents fail to replace teachers.

    Regarding the development of children, parents have to cooperate with teachers to help kids avoid trapping in dilemma. Thus, I think both parents and teachers can’t be threw during the growth of kids. But, from whole lives of human beings, parents’ effect outweigh the influence of teachers.

    March 18, 2020 at 1:25 am

    Ungraded

    [I am unable to complete the revision of your essay since it contains numerous problems.]

    As a human being, things [  logical confusion/things are not a human being] that we have experienced and people who we have met contribute to our life [unclear  ] . Without [ article error ] doubt, parents play an essential role in our daily lives. Compared with teachers, parents company with [ preposition error ] us at each crucial point of life.

    At the beginning of life, parents [ logical confusion ] passed down genes and gave kids’ lives, which influenced offspring on genetic aspects. To illustrate, people inherit from their parents many of their physical characteristics, like their eyes might copy from their mother or their ears come from their father and so forth[dangling errors  ] . Thus, no matter whether people agree or not, parents affect their kids deeply.

    During the long life journey[ redundant ] , kids are learning [wrong word  ] parents’ behaviors and imitating them. Parents are kids’ first teachers. Kids will absorb anything parents present before them. For instance, if parents usually read books, kids will be more likely to imitate them and hold a book despite that they are illiterate. Little kids will become used to reading and doing homework while enrolled in school. However, parents’ bad habits will also seduce children. Some parents enjoy smoking and don’t care if there are kids around them. So their children might be able to learn this behavior and smoke at the early age.

    Therefore, it is time for teachers to play their role in schools. Professional teachers will lead students to classify the good and evil, the wax and wane, the beauty and ugliness. The systematic educations help students obtain an overall development. Thus, kids will realize what they should not do and what they could do. Instructors are able to offset some problems caused by parents, such as cosseting kids and spoiling their children. At this certain point, parents fail to replace teachers.

    Regarding the development of children, parents have to cooperate with teachers to help kids avoid trapping in dilemma. Thus, I think both parents and teachers can’t be threw during the growth of kids. But, from whole lives of human beings, parents’ effect outweigh the influence of teachers.