Many people use distance-learning programmes(study material post,TV,Internet,etc) to study at home,but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many people use distance-learning programmes(study material post,TV,Internet,etc) to study at home,but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  • JasonL
    University: 西南大学
    Nationality: 中国
    January 18, 2022 at 8:50 am

    Many people use distance-learning programmes(study material post, TV, Internet, etc) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

    Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerning about distance-learning programmes to study at home. However, whether using such a kind of approach is still a controversial issue. In my perspective, adopting it is not that unreasonable as people stick.

    Firstly, it is more flexible in time management to study at home by using distance-learning programmes. Pupils can not only arrange their learning schedule in accordance with their own current situation but always have adequate time to rest. Therefore, with a timetable suitable for themselves, using that method to study at home can be efficient.

    In addition, students will not narrow their horizons through that way. Owing to the Internet, TV and study material post, they can improve the ability to search for the useful information they need by which they can attain more knowledge and absorb better at a soaring speed, compared with attending college or university. In that case, this learning style can be advocated by most learners.

    Whereas, that is not to say that choosing distance-learning programmes is a perfect plan. Some argue that once the programmes involve online materials, there must be some inference that distract students to some extent. But such conditions indeed only happen to those who do not have strict self-discipline, which needs more supervision.

    In sum, it is wise for people to use distance-learning programmes to study at home. Meanwhile, the distraction issue brought by the Internet is still needed to pay attention to, which also can be considered in the programmes design process. Only by doing so can we guarantee the advantage it brings to home learners.

     

    January 20, 2022 at 8:53 pm

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    JasonL
    University: 西南大学
    Nationality: 中国
    January 21, 2022 at 10:39 am

    Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about distance-learning programmes to study at home. However, whether using such a kind of approach is still a controversial issue. In my perspective, adopting it is not that unreasonable as people stick.

    Firstly, it is more flexible in time management to study at home by using distance-learning programmes. Pupils can not only arrange their learning schedule in accordance with their own current situation but always have adequate time to rest. Therefore, with a timetable suitable for themselves, using that method to study at home can be efficient.

    In addition, students will not narrow their horizons in that way. Owing to the Internet, TV and study material post, they can improve the ability to search for the useful information they need by which they can attain more knowledge and absorb better at a soaring speed, compared with attending college or university. In that case, this learning style can be advocated by most learners.

    Whereas, that is not to say that choosing distance-learning programmes is a perfect plan. Some argue that once the programmes involve online materials, there must be some inference that distracts students to some extent. But such conditions indeed only happen to those who do not have strict self-discipline, which needs more supervision.

    In sum, it is wise for people to use distance-learning programmes to study at home. Meanwhile, the distraction issue brought by the Internet is still needed to pay attention to, which also can be considered in the programmes design process. Only by doing so can we guarantee the advantage it brings to home learners.

    January 24, 2022 at 3:32 am

    Nowadays, an increasing number[  how do you know it is ‘increasing’ not ‘decreasing? ] of people (are concerned about)[ unclear  ] distance-learning programmes to study at home. However, whether using such a kind of approach[what does approach refer to?   ] is still a controversial issue[how do you justify it is a controversial issue?   ] . In my perspective, adopting it[what does IT refer to   ] is not that unreasonable as people stick[ unclear sentence  ] .

    Firstly, it is more flexible in time management to study at home by using distance-learning programmes. Pupils can not only arrange their learning schedule in accordance with their own current situation but always have adequate time to rest. Therefore, with a timetable suitable for themselves, using that method to study at home can be efficient.

    In addition, students will not narrow their horizons in that way. Owing to the Internet, TV and study material post, they can improve the ability to search for the useful information they need by which they can attain more knowledge and absorb better at a soaring speed, compared with attending college or university. In that case, this learning style can be advocated by most learners.

    Whereas, that is not to say that choosing distance-learning programmes is a perfect plan. Some argue that once the programmes involve online materials, there must be some inference that distracts students to some extent. But such conditions indeed only happen to those who do not have strict self-discipline, which needs more supervision.

    In sum, it is wise for people to use distance-learning programmes to study at home. Meanwhile, the distraction issue brought by the Internet is still needed to pay attention to, which also can be considered in the programmes design process. Only by doing so can we guarantee the advantage it brings to home learners.

    January 24, 2022 at 3:36 am

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