Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

  • nly
    University: Nankai University
    Nationality: China
    February 11, 2020 at 8:01 am

    Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

    Recently, recycling has become a general concern. It is sometimes argued that enacting laws by governments is the only way to improve the efficiency of waste recycling. In my view, governments are obligated to this issue, and strict requirements do have some advantages.

    The law ensures speed and scale of recycling. Complex types of household waste lead to unwillingness to recycle. The law, as a mandatory measure, has a stronger warning and supervisory effect. Under the supervision of it, each family is encouraged to recycle more actively. Once people get into the habit of recycling, it becomes the second nature. As a result, the phenomenon of delaying and refusing reduces. In addition, as the distribution of domestic waste is scattered, it is difficult for people to collect and tackle without any organizations. Only by laws can settle down this problem uniformly and efficiently. Local governments arrange the work in the guidance of laws to make sure that all wastes can be recycled.

    The law guarantees the sustainability of recycling. Since residents lack knowledge of resource classification and cyclic utilization, they cannot reuse the waste from homes adequately. The law not only plays a restrictive role, but also exerts its influence on education. By setting up specific methods, it can help people recycle the waste in a scientific way. From a long-term point of view, legal requirements are beneficial to cultivate people’s awareness of the significance of recycling. More and more household waste will be recycled in the future.

    In conclusion, although there are various ways to recycle more domestic waste, I believe that legislating is the most effective one.

    February 14, 2020 at 8:20 pm

    Score: 54

    Issues:

    1. Nearly 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.

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    nly
    University: Nankai University
    Nationality: China
    February 16, 2020 at 10:23 am

    Recently, recycling has become a general concern. It is sometimes argued that making laws should be the only way for governments to encourage waste recycling. In my view, strict requirements set by the authorities do have many advantages.

    The law ensures the efficiency of recycling. Complex types of household waste lead to the unwillingness to recycle. Legislation, as a mandatory measure, has a stronger warning and supervisory effect. Under the supervision of it, every family will take the initiative to recycle more garbage. Once people get into the habit of recycling, it becomes a second nature. As a result, the phenomenon of delaying and refusing reduces. The wide distribution of domestic waste also makes it difficult to recycle. Only through laws can this problem be effectively overcome. Local governments arrange the work in the guidance of regulations to make sure that all wastes can be recycled.

    The law guarantees the sustainability of recycling. Since residents lack knowledge about waste sorting and recycling, they cannot make full use of household garbage. The law not only plays a restrictive role but also exerts its influence on education. By setting up specific methods, it can help people recycle waste in a scientific way. From a long-term point of view, legal requirements cultivate people’s awareness of recycling. They will lay more emphasis on sustainable development, so waste of resources will decrease in the future.

    In conclusion, legal means must be required in order to tackle the waste problem. Governments should play their part in looking after the environment and limited resources.

    February 18, 2020 at 10:46 pm

    Score: 54

    Issues:

    1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

    Recently, recycling has become a general concern [ factual error]. (It is sometimes argued)[ passive/redundant] that making [wrong word ] laws should be the only way for governments to encourage waste recycling. In my view, strict requirements set by the [article error ]authorities do have many advantages.

    [lack of transitory word ]The[artile error ] law [ inconsistency/you used ‘laws’] ensures the efficiency of recycling. [ loss of organic connection from the prior sentence/Subject of a sentence should echo the subject/object of the prior sentence]Complex types of household waste lead to the [lack of modifier ]unwillingness to recycle. [ missing transitory word]Legislation, as a mandatory measure, has a stronger warning and supervisory effect. Under the supervision of it[unclear pronoun ], every family will take the initiative to recycle more garbage. Once people (get into) [incorrect/informal ] the habit of recycling, it becomes a second nature[ unclear]. As a result, the phenomenon of delaying and refusing reduces[ unclear]. The wide distribution of domestic waste also makes it difficult to recycle. [ loss of organic transaction]Only through laws can this problem be effectively overcome. [ loss of organic transaction]Local governments arrange the work in[ wrong preposition] the guidance of regulations to make sure that all wastes can be recycled.

    The law guarantees the sustainability of recycling[ rephrase]. Since residents lack knowledge about waste sorting and recycling, they cannot make full use of household garbage. The law not only plays a restrictive[ wrong word/word disposition] role but also exerts its influence on education. By setting up specific methods, it [unclear pronoun ]can help people recycle waste in a scientific way. From a long-term point of view[ redundant], legal requirements cultivate people’s awareness of recycling. They will lay[wrong word ] more emphasis on sustainable development, so[article error ] waste of resources will decrease in the future.

    In conclusion, legal means must be required[ passive] in order to tackle the waste problem. Governments should play their part in looking after the environment and limited resources.

    nly
    University: Nankai University
    Nationality: China
    February 25, 2020 at 10:55 am

    Recently, saving resources has become the consensus of most citizens. Some people argue that introducing laws should be the only way for governments to encourage waste recycling. In my view, strict requirements set by the administration do have many advantages.

    Laws ensure the efficiency of recycling. As a mandatory measure, legislation has a stronger warning and supervisory effect. Today, types of household waste are so complex that people are unwilling to recycle. Only under the supervision of laws, every family will take the initiative to recycle more garbage. Once people form the habit of recycling, the phenomenon of delaying and refusing reduces. In addition, enforcing laws is a government action. Local governments arrange the work uniformly under the guidance of regulations. As a result, although the distribution of domestic waste is wide, the majority of wastes can be recycled in a short time.

    Laws guarantee the sustainability of reusing household rubbish. Laws not only tighten relations on people but also exert influence on their education. By setting up specific methods, laws instruct people to recycle waste in a scientific way. Residents who lack knowledge about waste sorting and recycling can make full use of household garbage. In this way, legal requirements cultivate people’s awareness of recycling. They will lay more emphasis on sustainable development and dispose household waste in a more scientific way.

    In conclusion, legal means are necessary in order to tackle the waste problem. Governments should play their part in looking after the environment and limited resources.

    February 26, 2020 at 2:29 am

    Score: 47.9

    Recently, saving resources has become the consensus of most citizens [Really? Never heard about it. Don’t fabricate stories conflicting with truth  ]. Some people argue that introducing[wrong word  ] laws should be the only way for governments to encourage waste recycling. In my view, strict requirements set by the administration do have many advantages[ unclear/rephrase ].

    [  lack transitory word]Laws ensure the efficiency of recycling[ absurd ]. As a mandatory measure, legislation[wrong word/logically confusing  ] has a stronger warning and supervisory effect. Today, types of household waste are so complex that people are unwilling to recycle[lack object  ]. Only under the supervision of laws, every family will[ absolute statement ] take the initiative to recycle more garbage. Once people form the habit of recycling, the phenomenon of delaying and refusing reduces[logical confusing  ]. In addition, enforcing laws is a government action. Local governments arrange the work uniformly under the guidance of regulations[ unclear ]. As a result, although the distribution of domestic waste is wide, the majority of wastes can be recycled in a short time.

    Laws guarantee the sustainability of reusing [redundant  ]household rubbish. Laws not only tighten relations on people[ unclear ] but also exert influence on their education. By setting up specific methods, laws instruct people to recycle waste in a scientific way. Residents who lack knowledge about waste sorting and recycling can make full use of household garbage[logical incompleteness  ]. In this way, legal requirements cultivate people’s awareness of recycling. They[ unclear pronoun ] will lay more emphasis on[wordy/emphasize  ] sustainable development and dispose[ preposition error ] household waste in a more scientific way.

    In conclusion, legal means are necessary in order[grammatical error  ] to tackle the waste problem. Governments should play their part in looking after the environment and limited resources.