Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity

Animal testing is known[  serves ] as an efficient way to invent [ effective  ]medicines that are harmless to people, which are aimed at medical development and people’s health. [punctuation error concerning the use of coordinating conjunction   ]But I believe that it is unfair to use [ using  ]animals (as tools for advantage)[ unclear/grammatical error  ].

It[unclear pronoun   ] is of great importance to use animals in medical research since many [ existing  ]drugs are not able [avoid using NOT   ][ fail  ]to meet safety requirements and( be taken by humans)[unparallel/unclear]. Scientists found that the best way to solve the problem[ what problem  ] is to test on animals. It[ unclear pronoun  ] can reduce the possibility of the[ potential  ] adverse effect of drugs on (our body with minimum time and resources)[  unclear ]. Therefore, it[unclear pronoun   ] is true that animal experiments (play an important role)[ vague/be specific: how  ] in the medical industry.

On the other hand, (the benefit we get cannot be the reason to hurt innocent animals)[unclear   ]. Humans and animals are both[  word improperly placed ] members of nature and have[unparallel   ] equal access to live[ grammatical error  ] on the earth. Although these experiments are useful[ vague word  ], humans do not have the right to put animals into unknown danger, considering the possible damage that can be caused to animals. [ punctuation error  ]So the[ article error  ] government must impose restrictions on (these testing)[grammatical error   ].

In my view, animal experiments are not the only way to achieve *medical purposes)[ unclear  ]. With[unclear preposition/Consequent to/As a result of   ] the development of the science industry, we have many alternatives, such as[ including  ] microdosing. In addition, many countries and international organizations have banned animal testing, which means [ that  ]our consciousness of humanity has increased. [ punctuation error with coordinating conjunction  ]And now it[ unclear pronoun  ] is time for us to take action.

In conclusion, there[ avoid using There BE  ] is always (another option for us instead of hurting animals)[ unclear  ]. Because animals are our friends and family[absolute statement   ], we should protect them rather than take advantage of them.