People who develop many different skills are more successful than people focusing on one skill only. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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  • lepara42
    University: SCU
    Nationality: Chinese
    October 10, 2021 at 9:37 am

    People who develop many different skills are more successful than people focusing on one skill only. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    In nowadays society, the multitasking lifestyle is trending among young generations. The so called slash-teens are known to have different skills and different careers that shifts during time span. Nevertheless, I strongly contradicts with this view and believes one is more likely to achieve success when focusing on one skill only. First and foremost, one who tries to grasp more than one skills are easily distracted from what they’re doing and is less likely to master one specific skill. A scientific study done by Harvard University in 2018 showed that given a certain amount of time, adults with similar IQ test results show significant difference in both the time taken and the quality of their work when the only difference is whether they listened to music while finishing given works. If one cannot even finish works in high quality with distractions of music, then how is one ever going accomplish the same results dabbling in more than one skill areas?

    What is more, one who has multiple skills bears more uncertainty about the future.With the decision of future paths being already pretty hard, the realist burden of actually getting a stable job stress the hardship further for those with several skills. Given a certain position, who is going to have a better chance at getting it, one who has specialized in this specific area for over a decade, or someone who only knows a little about it but has many other unrelated skills?

    Last but not least, those with one skill and one skill only has the benefit of strong determination and high-intensity focus. If I grow up learning one thing and this particular thing is all I do for over a decade, surely ill be mastering this skill at high level at a relatively young age. Not to mention the future paths will be clear for me to see, that is I know more than those with multiple skill what I want with my life.

    October 11, 2021 at 9:47 am

    In nowadays (our fast-paced) society, the (delete) multitasking lifestyle (delete) is trending among young generations. The so(missing hypen)called slash-teens (Generation Z) are known to have different skills and different careers that shifts during time span (unclear what this means, rewrite). Nevertheless, I strongly contradicts (word choice error) with this view and believes (subject-verb agreement error) one is more likely to achieve success when focusing on one skill only. First and foremost, one (someone) who tries to grasp more than one skills (singular) are (subject-verb agreement) easily distracted from what they’re (they are) doing and is less likely to master one specific skill. A scientific study done by Harvard University in 2018 (simplify) showed that given a certain amount of time, adults with similar IQ test results show (missing article) significant difference in both the time taken and the quality of their work when the only difference is whether they listened to music while finishing given works (simplify). If one (you) cannot even finish works (work) in high quality with distractions of music, then how is one (are you) ever going accomplish the same results dabbling in more than one skill areas (singular)?

    What is more, one who has multiple skills bears more uncertainty about the future.With the decision of future paths being already pretty hard, the realist burden of actually getting a stable job stress the hardship further for those with several skills. Given a certain position, who is going to have a better chance at getting it, one who has specialized in this specific area for over a decade, or someone who only knows a little about it but has many other unrelated skills?

    Last but not least, those with one skill and one skill only has the benefit of strong determination and high-intensity focus. If I grow up learning one thing and this particular thing is all I do for over a decade, surely ill be mastering this skill at high level at a relatively young age. Not to mention the future paths will be clear for me to see, that is I know more than those with multiple skill what I want with my life.

    October 12, 2021 at 3:57 am

    Partial Revision (please fix similar errors, revise whole essay, and resubmit)

    lepara42
    University: SCU
    Nationality: Chinese
    October 12, 2021 at 12:59 pm

    <p class=”p1″><span class=”s1″>In our fast-paced society, multitasking is trending among young generations. The so-called Generation Z are known to have different skills and different careers that give them the name of </span><span class=”s2″>“</span><span class=”s1″>slash youth</span><span class=”s2″>”</span><span class=”s1″>. Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with this view and believe one is more likely to achieve success when focusing on one skill only. First and foremost, someone who tries to grasp more than one skill is easily distracted from what hey are doing and is less likely to master one specific skill. A scientific study done by Harvard University showed that given a certain amount of time, adults with similar IQ test results show a significant difference in both the time taken and the quality of their work when the only difference is whether they listened to music. If you cannot even finish work in high quality with distractions of music, then how are you ever going accomplish the same results dabbling in more than one skill area?</span></p>
    <p class=”p1″><span class=”s1″>What is more, someone who has multiple skills bears more uncertainty about the future.With the decision of future paths being already pretty hard, the realist burden of actually getting a stable job stress the hardship further for those with several skills. Given a certain position, who is going to have a better chance at getting it, one who has specialized in this specific area for over a decade, or someone who only knows a little about it but has many other unrelated skills?</span></p>
    <p class=”p1″><span class=”s1″>Last but not least, those with one skill and one skill only have the benefit of strong determination and high-intensity focus. If I grow up learning one thing and this particular thing is all I do for over a decade, surely I’ll be mastering this skill at high level at a relatively young age. Not to mention the future paths will be clear for me to see, that is I know more than those with multiple skill what I want with my life.</span></p>

    October 17, 2021 at 1:14 am

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    lepara42
    University: SCU
    Nationality: Chinese
    October 18, 2021 at 8:31 am

    <p class=”p1″><span class=”s1″>In our fast-paced society, multitasking is trending among young generations. The so-called Generation Z are known to have different skills and different careers that give them the name of </span><span class=”s2″>“</span><span class=”s1″>slash youth</span><span class=”s2″>”</span><span class=”s1″>. Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with this view and believe one is more likely to achieve success when focusing on one skill only. First and foremost, someone who tries to grasp more than one skill is easily distracted from what hey are doing and is less likely to master one specific skill. A scientific study done by Harvard University showed that given a certain amount of time, adults with similar IQ test results show a significant difference in both the time taken and the quality of their work when the only difference is whether they listened to music. If you cannot even finish work in high quality with distractions of music, then how are you ever going accomplish the same results dabbling in more than one skill area?</span></p>
    <p class=”p1″><span class=”s1″>What is more, someone who has multiple skills bears more uncertainty about the future.With the decision of future paths being already pretty hard, the realist burden of actually getting a stable job stress the hardship further for those with several skills. Given a certain position, who is going to have a better chance at getting it, one who has specialized in this specific area for over a decade, or someone who only knows a little about it but has many other unrelated skills?</span></p>
    <p class=”p1″><span class=”s1″>Last but not least, those with one skill and one skill only have the benefit of strong determination and high-intensity focus. If I grow up learning one thing and this particular thing is all I do for over a decade, surely I’ll be mastering this skill at high level at a relatively young age. Not to mention the future paths will be clear for me to see, that is I know more than those with multiple skill what I want with my life.。</span></p>

    lepara42
    University: SCU
    Nationality: Chinese
    October 18, 2021 at 8:32 am

    In our fast-paced society, multitasking is trending among young generations. The so-called Generation Z are known to have different skills and different careers that give them the name of “slash youth”. Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with this view and believe one is more likely to achieve success when focusing on one skill only. First and foremost, someone who tries to grasp more than one skill is easily distracted from what hey are doing and is less likely to master one specific skill. A scientific study done by Harvard University showed that given a certain amount of time, adults with similar IQ test results show a significant difference in both the time taken and the quality of their work when the only difference is whether they listened to music. If you cannot even finish work in high quality with distractions of music, then how are you ever going accomplish the same results dabbling in more than one skill area?
    What is more, someone who has multiple skills bears more uncertainty about the future.With the decision of future paths being already pretty hard, the realist burden of actually getting a stable job stress the hardship further for those with several skills. Given a certain position, who is going to have a better chance at getting it, one who has specialized in this specific area for over a decade, or someone who only knows a little about it but has many other unrelated skills?
    Last but not least, those with one skill and one skill only have the benefit of strong determination and high-intensity focus. If I grow up learning one thing and this particular thing is all I do for over a decade, surely I’ll be mastering this skill at high level at a relatively young age. Not to mention the future paths will be clear for me to see, that is I know more than those with multiple skill what I want with my life.

    October 18, 2021 at 9:34 am

     

    In our fast-paced society, multitasking is trending among young generations. The so-called (delete) Generation Z are known to have different skills and different (delete) careers that give them the name of “slash youth”. Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with this view and believe one is more likely to achieve success when focusing on one skill only.

     

    First and foremost, someone who tries to grasp more than one skill is easily distracted from what they are doing and is less likely to master one specific skill. A scientific study done (delete) by (at) Harvard University showed that given a certain amount of time, adults with similar IQ test results show a significant difference in both the time taken and the quality of their work when the only difference is whether (if) they listened to music. If you cannot even finish work in high quality (high-quality work) with distractions (the distraction) of music, then how are you ever going accomplish the same results dabbling in more than one skill area?

     

    What is more (Furthermore), someone who has multiple skills bears more uncertainty about the future (has a less well-defined career path). With the decision of future paths being already pretty hard, the realist burden of actually getting a stable job stress the hardship further for those with several skills (unclear what this means, rewrite). Given a certain position, who is going to have a better chance at getting it (the job), one who has specialized (a specialist) in this specific (delete) area for over a decade, or someone who only knows a little about it but has many other unrelated skills?

    Last but not least, those with one skill and one skill only have the benefit of strong determination and high-intensity focus (are focused and determined). If I grow up learning (only) one thing (skill) and this particular thing (it) is all I do for over a decade, surely I’ll be mastering (I will master) this skill at a high level at a relatively young age. Not to mention the (delete) future career paths will be clear for me to see, that is I know more than those with multiple skill what I want with my life. (delete)

    October 18, 2021 at 2:17 pm

    Final Revision

    lepara42
    University: SCU
    Nationality: Chinese
    October 19, 2021 at 3:39 am

    In our fast-paced society, multitasking is trending among young generations. The Generation Z are known to have different skills and careers that give them the name of “slash youth”. Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with this view and believe one is more likely to achieve success when focusing on one skill only.

     

    First and foremost, someone who tries to grasp more than one skill is easily distracted from what they are doing and is less likely to master one specific skill. A scientific study at Harvard University showed that given a certain amount of time, adults with similar IQ test results show a significant difference in both the time taken and the quality of their work if they listened to music. If you cannot even do high-quality work with the distraction of music, then how are you ever going accomplish the same results dabbling in more than one skill area?

    Furthermore,someone who has multiple skills has a less well-defined career path. Choosing a career path is hard enough itself, not to mention the fact that one with multiple skills has less possibilities getting an actual job. Given a certain position, who is going to have a better chance at getting the job, a specialist in this area for over a decade, or someone who only knows a little about it but has many other unrelated skills?

    Last but not least, those with one skill and one skill only are focused and determined. If I grow up learning only one skill and it is all I do for over a decade, surely I will master this skill at a high level at a relatively young age. Future career paths will be clear for me to see.

    October 19, 2021 at 2:03 pm

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