Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.

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Today[ ,  ] many people surf on the Internet and enjoy the convenience [ as a result of/resulted from  ] which is brought by online access. Some may argue that governments[ government  ] should offer [ the  ] Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. However, as far as I’m concerned, (it’s unreasonable to say so)[ use concrete writing that carries more specific information  ] .

Firstly[ ,  ] the Internet is not as significant as (basic necessary)[ ?  ] now. It’s true that the[Admittedly,   ] Internet allows many people to broaden their horizons and enjoy their online time without stress. However, without the Internet, we still have many ways to enjoy our life. If we don’t[  didn’t ] have roads or[ ,  ] food[, or   ] and water, we can’t[ grammatical error  ] even turn to help. Hence, the Internet is not so important[use words carrying more info instead of using adjectives like Important/necessary   ] at all.

In addition, it’s [ avoid using It IS  ] unreasonable to ask the government to offer[ the  ] Internet access to citizens at no cost. There are[avoid using There are/is   ] many basic expenses in our daily life,[ punctuation error  ] we need to pay for food and drink. We can’t live without it[ unclear pronoun  ] . [ punctuation error  ] So everyone needs to pay the bill for their life. We can’t always depend on the government, because there are still many people need the money to change their life now. The government’s money is limited, [ punctuation error  ] we should let them[unclear pronoun   ] use the money to do more meaningful things like[such as helping   ] help the children attending[ grammatical error  ] school and having[grammatical error   ] breakfast.

Last but not least, we can’t enjoy the convenient life for granted[unclear   ] . Many farmers contribute to our society by working hard day by day in order to let everyone eats the food[verbose   ] . Our government spends [ spent  ] millions of dollars in order to transform water from the south to the north[ unclear  ] . [ punctuation error  ] So how could we just use it[ unclear pronoun  ] for granted? Many engineers work day and night in order to maintain the access to the Internet. Paying the bill for the important things in our life is also a great way to reward them[ unclear pronoun  ] . It[ unclear pronoun  ] ’s our turn to repay their hard work.

All in all, the Internet actually changes [has changed   ] our lives in many ways, but in my opinion, (it’s unnecessary to do that)[unclear   ] .