Some people believe that charity organizations should give aid to those in greatest need, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations should concentrate on helping people who live in their own country instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that charity organizations should give aid to those in greatest need, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations should concentrate on helping people who live in their own country instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  • SiLenCe
    University: Beijing Information Science and Technology University
    Nationality: china
    August 7, 2020 at 9:57 am

    It is universally acknowledged that charity organizations should help people in need.However,people have different definition of  ‘people in need’.Some people support that charity organizations should only focus on those people who live in their own country,but others believe that they should give a hand to every people in need,no matter whether live in their own nation or not.I agree with the latter.

    First of all,the definition of “charity organization” should clarify,why those institutions called this phrase by almost all people around the world?Because people treat them as the symbol of ‘kindness’ and ‘love’, they can use the special power help every people in need as the representative of people,nobody should left because their nationality,people should rethink their common choice that endow an institution discriminate people if the charity organizations mind this factor very much.Moreover,in fact,only a few of charity organization on behalf of a single country,most of this kind of organization receive economical fund from many different countries.In the circumstances,charity organizations need undertake the due obligations that help people in need all around the world,give away food ,provide them with financial support and so on.Last but not least,those organizations not a symbol of ‘love’,but also mainstay of those people who in desperate need of help,when they know even their mental mainstay already abandon them,how would they behave?It could result the consequent increasing of suicide rate or crime rate,the drug problem threat society again.

    In conclusion,’people in need’ means every people in need,rather than those people who own special nationality in need,those organizations shoulder the responsibility to help people,it can be the interpretation of ‘All rivers run into the sea’.