Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  • JACK
    University: Ocean university
    Nationality: China
    August 27, 2019 at 10:51 am

    IELTS Writing Topic: Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

    Nowadays,population explosion brings lots of different problems in society.Some people think that we should accept a bad situation,while some people argue that we need to try and improve such situations.In my opinion,we need to try to change your situation.

    People would gain a good emotion and motivation in good situation.Those would have enough energy to work and study as well as have a nice mood to motivate themselves to enjoy their daily routine.For instance,if the salary and empolyee’s welfare is suitable for employees,they would not move to different employers ,and their feeling might promote them devote to the work as well.

    People could improve the quality of life via changing their situation.Although some people want a stable source of income to ensure a sense of well-being life,they just work like a machine rather than doing what they are willing to do.For instance,a graduate who major is education works in a factory to save his life.After 3 years,he get a teacher certificate by his effort so he become a teacher of primary school,which raise his quality of life.

    Admittedly,some people might work well under pressure in a bad situation,which improve their handing stress ability and responsibility.They need to rely on themselves to address difficult problems such as finding a investment and gain various social experiences.However,they still feel anxious in this situation so that they could not reach their goals.

    To sum up,people should make their situation better,especially when people’s motivation and quality of life is taken into consideration.

    September 3, 2019 at 10:19 pm

    Score: 15.2

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