Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent

Recently, whether a person succeeds more rely on the coordination or the individual work by himself has become a debatable topic. My belief is that a closely linked world and society are quite beneficial to ourselves.

In the first place, group working has become an essential skill in today’s highly globalized world. Three months ago, I was a marketing intern in a world-famous beauty company. In order to explore brilliant brand concept and campaigns, everyone engaged in brainstorms.  Throughout various discussions, we set and revised pitch deck again and again to defend any possible mistakes. Fortunately,  we finally did a good project, which proves that the power of a group is stronger than one person.

On the other hand, the reliance on each other actually improves the relationship among people. In other words, more coordination makes we can listen, feel and consider each other better. For example, each year, the UN will hold lots of world summits, aiming to gather countries to solve diverse problems as many as possible. In the process of dealing with those issues, such as global warming and terrorism. Therefore, people from different nations will exchange their opinions and eventually come to an agreement.

In short, being dependent is a worldwide trend, not only in daily work, but also in international society. I believe, a combined world will bring more hope for future.

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Recently, there came an argument in society about whether a person more depends on coordination or individual work by himself. Both sides have their own reasons, but I more favor the first view.

In the first place, group working has become a basic skill in today’s globalized world. In college, teachers advocate group presentations, and in work place, leaders prefer teamwork. For example, three months ago, I worked as a marketing intern in a world-famous advertising agency. In order to make brilliant brand concept for our client, everyone engaged in brainstorms. Throughout discussions, we set and revised pitch deck again and again to defend any possible mistakes. Finally, we did a good project, which proves that the power of teamwork is endless.

On the other hand, the reliance on each other improves the relationship among people beyond nations. In other words, teamwork helps us listen, feel and consider each other better. For example, each year, the United Nations holds lots of world summits, aiming to gather countries to solve problems as many as possible. In the process of dealing with those issues, such as global warming and population crisis. Therefore, people from different countries get chances to exchange opinions and work together to protect our earth. In fact, people have learned to be dependent since ancient times, which saved our ancestors from danger and hunger.

In short, humans being dependent is a worldwide trend as almost everything gets more connected. To some extent, it enables each person to think and work as a family, which will benefit the society a lot.