Some students choose a university because they have heard about good jobs that students at that university get after graduation. Others choose a university because its professors are famous. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Some students choose a university because they have heard about good jobs that students at that university get after graduation. Others choose a university because its professors are famous. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  • asuna666
    University: 同济大学
    Nationality: 中国
    September 4, 2022 at 4:17 pm

    Some students choose a university because they have heard about good jobs that students at that university get after graduation. Others choose a university because its professors are famous. Which view do you agree with? 

    Choosing a university is an extremely important thing. When we choose, we need to investigate all the aspects. Some claims that students should choose a university where the alumni get a good job after graduation. Others claim that students should choose a university where the professors are famous. Given the choice between the two universities, I would prefer the latter because of the academic learning and professional development. My viewpoint is going to be illustrated thoroughly by the following reasons.

    First of all, famous professors are more likely to be skilled. So we are more likely to get better academic learning from famous professors and acquire a large range of knowledge. In detail, we can broaden our horizon and have a better understanding with the professor’s high-quality teaching and trigger our interest by expanding our knowledge base. With better understanding of the knowledge, we can reduce errors and save time.

    Moreover, reputed professors are tend to have a large social network. They will invite lots of the expertise in every industry which will help us learn all the aspects of all the industries and get an answer of our doubts about future career and also have chances to get acquainted with the expertise which will enlarge our social circles. Large social circles can not only increase our competiveness but also help the students get a good job

    Academic learning, the foundation of students’ future development, can be a total different level with the famous professors’ instruction. Professional development, essential to students’ future success, will boost with reputed professors’ large social network. To conclude, famous professors can help us not only in academic learning but also in professional development. There is no doubt that we should choose a univerisity with famous professors.

    September 5, 2022 at 2:22 am

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    asuna666
    University: 同济大学
    Nationality: 中国
    September 5, 2022 at 2:51 am

    Choosing a university is an extremely important thing. When we choose, we need to investigate all the aspects. Some claims that students should choose a university where the alumni get a good job after graduation. Others claim that students should choose a university where the professors are famous. Given the choice between the two universities, I would prefer the latter because of the academic learning and professional development. My viewpoint is going to be illustrated thoroughly by the following reasons.

    First of all, famous professors are more likely to be skilled. So we are more likely to get better academic learning from famous professors and acquire a large range of knowledge. In detail, we can broaden our horizons and trigger our interest by expanding our knowledge base. With the professor’s high-quality teaching, we can have a better understanding of the knowledge and reduce errors which will save a lot of time for us.

    Moreover, reputed professors tend to have a large social network. They will invite lots of experts in every industry which will help us learn all the aspects of all the industries and get an answer to our doubts about future careers and also have chances to get acquainted with the experts which will enlarge our social circles. Large social circles can not only increase our competitiveness but also help students get good jobs.

    Academic learning, the foundation of students’ future development, can be on a different level with famous professors’ instruction. Professional development, essential to students’ future success, will boost with reputed professors’ large social circles. To conclude, famous professors can help us not only in academic learning but also in professional development. Thus, there is no doubt that we should choose a university with famous professors.

    September 5, 2022 at 4:09 pm

    Choosing a university is an extremely important thing. When we choose, [, and  ]we need to investigate all the aspects [ prior to making such a decision ]. Some claims [grammatical error  ]that students should choose a university where the[ its ] alumni get[grammatical error  ] a good job after graduation. Others claim that students should choose a university where the[its(  ] professors are famous. (Given the choice between the two universities)[ unclear ], I would prefer the latter because of the[ grammatical error ] academic learning and professional development[ unclear ]. My viewpoint is going to be illustrated thoroughly by the following reasons.[  summarize the reasons]

    First of all, famous professors are more likely to be skilled. So we are more likely to get better academic learning from famous professors and acquire a large range of knowledge. In detail, we can broaden our horizons and trigger our interest by expanding our knowledge base. With the professor’s high-quality teaching, we can have a better understanding of the knowledge and reduce errors which will save a lot of time for us.

    Moreover, reputed professors tend to have a large social network. They will invite lots of experts in every industry which will help us learn all the aspects of all the industries and get an answer to our doubts about future careers and also have chances to get acquainted with the experts which will enlarge our social circles. Large social circles can not only increase our competitiveness but also help students get good jobs.

    Academic learning, the foundation of students’ future development, can be on a different level with famous professors’ instruction. Professional development, essential to students’ future success, will boost with reputed professors’ large social circles. To conclude, famous professors can help us not only in academic learning but also in professional development. Thus, there is no doubt that we should choose a university with famous professors.

    September 5, 2022 at 4:14 pm

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