Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Issues:

1. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
2. Make your argument clear in your introduction – perhaps shortly state the two main reasons
3. Only use one transition phrase per sentence

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Both friends and teachers have a meaningful and necessary influence on each student. Spending more time with How much time they can spend together determines how much friends can affect other the students. Also, their being a similar age allows them to know each other better well in a short time. So, I believe friends have more influence than teachers do.

To begin with, most students spend their time with friends during school, weekends, or many and years after graduating. However, they might only see their teachers during class time. Since students have more time with friends and understand each other, they might change their habits based on what their friends do make changes for a personal opinion from friends. In contrast, students seldom spend much time interacting with teachers. Without reasons o Other than study, the a teacher can’t know their students on a very personal level. In this case, the relationship between students and teachers is not strong enough to change students’ minds.

Next, students and most of their friends are about the same age. Thus, they have many things in common. They can discuss homework together or play video games on weekends. During the time they spend together, friends may influence each other students. For example, I always play badminton with my friends. He does not only helps me improve my skills but also encourages me to keep exercising. Thanks to him, I have a healthier body. Meanwhile, because of the generation gap, many teachers don’t have similar interests a similar topic to students. This situation also limits teachers’ interaction with students.

Last, I have to admit that teachers may influence their students significantly a lot if they have a good relationship. As adults, teachers often give valuable advice. But it is not very common for people with such a big age gap to have a relationship beyond different ages. I still believe that the more time we spend with someone, the more they affect us. In short, I do agree that friends influence students more than teachers do.