Do you think the students are more interested in politics than in the past?

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  • reus
    University: Nanjing university
    Nationality: China
    December 29, 2021 at 6:21 am

    Do you think the students are more interested in politics than in the past?

    Throughout history, politics have played a prevailing role in every individual’s life. In this regard, there is a discussion about whether nowadays students make more contribution to such events than before. In my perspective, I believe today’s teenagers are definitely more enthusiastic in politics issues, especially considering they have more access to political information and better independent thinking ability.

    First and foremost, owing to the development of technology, teenagers are easier to acquire politics news than in the past. This is because every word of politicians could be watched through a little touch on the screen with no limitation of time and location. For example, I can recall the first use of cell phone in my lifetime, I downloaded as many applications as I could. A huge number of notifications were sent to me by these apps and it is this time when I get to know politics. Therefore, I firmly hold that these devices could help students participate in social politics discussions more than before.

    In addition to the technological advancement, independent thinking ability and social responsibility taught by better education also contribute to their better performance in political issues. I can recall a friend from my high school days who used to talk a lot about social problems and country relationships at that time and he always pointed out his opinion in political class that even amazed the teachers sometimes. He once told me that it is every teenager’s duty to offer political advice and shoulder social responsibility. So, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that politics is a more prevailing topic among most teenagers.

    Admittedly, there are many entertainments on the internet, like countless comedy movies, funny videos and online games, attracting and distracting them. However, as for me, even though I enjoy these games and videos so much, I will only entertain myself when I feel tired and just want to relax. International news, national policies, and social problems are the first priority.

    January 2, 2022 at 5:26 pm

    Throughout history, politics have[grammatical error ] played a prevailing role in every individual’s life[questionable statement ] . In this regard, there is a discussion about whether nowadays students make more contribution to such events[what events? ] than before.[ use your own words to rewrite the sentence]( In my perspective, I believe)[ repetition] today’s teenagers are definitely[absolute word ] more enthusiastic in[wrong preposition ] politics issues[questionable statement ] , especially considering they have more access to political information and (better independent thinking ability)[ questionable statement] .

    First and foremost, owing to the development of technology, teenagers are easier to acquire politics news than in the past. This is because every word of politicians could be watched through a little touch on the screen with no limitation of time and location. For example, I can recall the first use of cell phone in my lifetime, I downloaded as many applications as I could. A huge number of notifications were sent to me by these apps and it is this time when I get to know politics. Therefore, I firmly hold that these devices could help students participate in social politics discussions more than before.

    In addition to the technological advancement, independent thinking ability and social responsibility taught by better education also contribute to their better performance in political issues. I can recall a friend from my high school days who used to talk a lot about social problems and country relationships at that time and he always pointed out his opinion in political class that even amazed the teachers sometimes. He once told me that it is every teenager’s duty to offer political advice and shoulder social responsibility. So, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that politics is a more prevailing topic among most teenagers.

    Admittedly, there are many entertainments on the internet, like countless comedy movies, funny videos and online games, attracting and distracting them. However, as for me, even though I enjoy these games and videos so much, I will only entertain myself when I feel tired and just want to relax. International news, national policies, and social problems are the first priority.

    January 2, 2022 at 5:32 pm

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    reus
    University: Nanjing university
    Nationality: China
    January 3, 2022 at 7:05 am

    Throughout history, politics is always a hot topic among citizens. In this regard, whether nowadays students make more contribution to politics events  than before has been debated for a long period of time. In my perspective, today’s teenagers probably have more interests in politics, especially considering the help of digital devices and the advancement of education.

    First and foremost, owing to the development of technology, teenagers are much easier to acquire political information. This is because every word of politicians could be watched through a cellphone screen with no limitation of time and location. For example, I can recall the first use of cell phone in my lifetime, a huge number of notifications were sent to me downloaded apps. It is the first time when I receive politics news and I cultivated a habit to read news everyday after that day. Therefore, I firmly hold that these devices provide teenagers more access to political information .

    In addition to the technological advancement, independent thinking ability and social responsibility taught by better education also contribute to their better performance in political issues. I can recall a friend from my high school days who used to talk a lot about social problems and country relationships at that time and he always pointed out his opinion in political class that even amazed the teachers sometimes. He once told me that it is every teenager’s duty to offer political advice and shoulder social responsibility. So, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that politics has became a prevailing topic among today’s teenagers.

    Admittedly, there are many entertainments on the internet, like countless comedy movies, funny videos and online games, attracting and distracting them. However, I will only entertain myself by these ways when I feel tired and just want to relax. In most cases, international news, national policies, and social problems are the first priority. Hence, I believe that discussing politic issues are more popular among today’s students.

    January 3, 2022 at 9:49 pm

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    First and foremost, owing to the development of technology, (teenagers are much easier)[ confusion  ] to acquire political information. This is because every word of politicians could be watched through a cellphone screen with no limitation of time and location. For example, I can recall the first use of cell phone in my lifetime, a huge number of notifications were sent to me downloaded apps. It is the first time when I receive politics news and I cultivated a habit to read news everyday after that day. Therefore, I firmly hold that these devices provide teenagers more access to political information .

    In addition to the technological advancement, independent thinking ability and social responsibility taught by better education also contribute to their better performance in political issues. I can recall a friend from my high school days who used to talk a lot about social problems and country relationships at that time and he always pointed out his opinion in political class that even amazed the teachers sometimes. He once told me that it is every teenager’s duty to offer political advice and shoulder social responsibility. So, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that politics has became a prevailing topic among today’s teenagers.

    Admittedly, there are many entertainments on the internet, like countless comedy movies, funny videos and online games, attracting and distracting them. However, I will only entertain myself by these ways when I feel tired and just want to relax. In most cases, international news, national policies, and social problems are the first priority. Hence, I believe that discussing politic issues are more popular among today’s students.

    January 3, 2022 at 10:30 pm

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