Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Successful people are willing to try new things and take risks, while others just follow their daily routine to do what they’re already familiar with. I agree this is an essential difference between the successful and the ordinary,[punctuation error   ] because the[ article error  ] bravery to encounter new things lead[zero-conditional: often leads   ] to creation[ /innovation  ] and self-development.

[ First, s  ]Successful people want to explore new ways. They’re innovative, open-mined (and don’t)[structural problem   ] stick to a blocked path. This[ use specific NOUN  ] gives them the power of creativity, enhancing their chance to reveal the truth. Just consider how Einstein developed the theory of relativity[ upper case issue  ]. In his times, scientists were so loyal to classic theories that even it[unclear pronoun   ] generated contradictions, [ punctuation error  ]they never doubted its righteousness. Einstein was more openminded [  spelling error ]and dared[ structural issue  ] to revise his early path on classic theories, so he finally revealed the truth. His success is exactly due to his welcome to [resulted precisely from his willingness to embrace   ]new things.

However, more people just stick to what they already know. The reason behind that are [ grammatical error  ]laziness and (cost of silence)[ unclear  ]. When doing what we know is far easier than figuring out new solutions,[ punctuation error  ] it’s more likely for us to stay in the comfort zone. When we’ve already spent lots of effort into [ preposition error  ]what we stick to, it’s tough for us to try new things, as[unclear adverbial word   ] they could make us change our route. Actually, Einstein was not the first one to think of his theory[ specify  ], but he was the first to establish it. Many people are not unable to innovate, they just don’t want to ‘betray’ what they already have.

Indeed, (success of new paths)[ unclear  ] go[  grammatical error ] hand in hand with risks. Jobs took the new path to create smart phone[ spelling error  ] and achieved huge success. Nokia also tried a new path to combine cellphone[ word form error  ] with handheld gameplayer, but they ended up in total loss. Not all innovation could succeed. But without those attempts, any great success of humanity won’t have been achieved. Bravery to take risks itself is a characteristic of successful people.

To sum up, taking new paths brings about chances to succeed and fulfillments[word form error   ] in life. That’s why I believe in trying new things and taking the risks.