Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Education, the dominating foundation of people’s quality of life, without which society cannot thrive smoothly[ grammatical error/miss a verb ]. With more and more people recognizing the value and significance[ redundancy /means the same as ‘the value’] of education,( heated debate over whether teachers are less respected in present-day society than in the past has been raging for some time)[ hard to read/use your own words to write ]. In some people’s opinion,[ Some people argue that ] teachers are more respected nowadays. Contrary to this opinion, I think the status of teachers in the past was higher than it is these days.

(What should be prioritized is that technology is becoming more sophisticated in recent decades.)[confusion/irrelevant to the topic  ] [ coherence issue/subject fails to echo the subject/object of the prior sentence ]Students can acquire knowledge by searching on the internet or using (other)[the internet is not social media  ] social media tools, instead of gaining information solely from teachers in the classroom. To start with, the search engine[ coherence issue ] is convenient since it is equipped with high accuracy capacity[ confusion/it is the algorithm that has high accuracy in terms of SERP ], stimulating students to retrieve information by themselves at any time. To be more specific, students can use their mobile phones to obtain knowledge whenever they like. In contrast, making a [ article error ]appointment with teachers is not as flexible as searching by yourself[ inconsistency in person / 3rd person to 1st person ]. [ choppy sentence ]Teachers are no longer irreplaceable compared with [ their counterparts in ]the past.

What must be equally worth discussing is that [Additionally,  ]the[ article error/’the’ is not needed in general description ] (expansion of the education system)[ confusion ] created a (booming)[wrong word  ] need for teachers. Initially[ wrong transitional word ], high demand for education and[but  ] relatively limited educational resources these days leads to a lower [teacher quality  ]standard for people to become teachers. In the past, a teacher could teach many disciplines[ subjects/in many disciplines ], such as literature, art, science, etc. Their reputation was commensurate with their dedication and ability. However, in [ In ]recent days, [ however ]we[ coherence ] can hardly find a teacher proficient in more than one field, [punctuation error  ]mostly they are just subject teachers. Therefore, a teacher is more likely to be viewed as a job that people can choose to be rather than someone worth special appreciation.[unclear  ]

In a nutshell[In conclusion/Use literal writing in academic English  ], although teachers are still worth students[word form error  ] respect in today’s world, [  punctuation error]in terms of technological advancement and (education system extension)[ unclear ], they are certainly less valued than they used to be.