Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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  • Claire W
    University: Macau
    Nationality: Macau
    November 4, 2019 at 2:48 pm

    TOEFL Writing Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    Children are the future of a nation and teachers are those who make the nation’s future better. Due to the current situation that more and more kids get the opportunity of going to school, I disagree with the statement of teachers are more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.

    With the development of technology, every country in the world have seen the power of it. However, technology can not be built up without strong education background, in which the most important link is teacher. Teachers are the media between concept on books and students. Students can get direct feedback from their teachers, which can help them have better understandings of knowledge. Thus, if a country wants to stand strong worldwide, it has to increase its spending on education, especially in training teachers. Moreover, with the government have valued more on normal education, the social status of teachers have been highly increased, more and more people appreciate and value teachers than before.

    Individuals are also having more and more professional skills to learn than before because the division of work in society are getting more specific. If one wants to be really professional in a certain field, he can’t achieve his goal without getting help from a teacher. If a normal person wants to graduate from university, he has to take 16 years of education, meaning that he would be helped by hundreds of teachers, which not only help him handling the knowledge he needs to survive in the community, but also mold who he is. Teachers’ existence can be influential for a person’s whole life and their contribution and sacrifice are remembered by all their students. From an individual’s perspective, the teachers are also highly appreciated and valued than before.

    Teachers in the past are not pouring that much emotions to their students and were not meaning that much in an individual’s life, neither to the whole society. That makes their occupations less important before than now.

    To summarize, the teachers are getting appreciated and valued much than before in modern society.

    November 4, 2019 at 10:52 pm

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    Claire W
    University: Macau
    Nationality: Macau
    November 5, 2019 at 9:23 am

    Children are the future of the country and teachers are those who make the future better. More and more kids are given the opportunity of going to school. Based on that, I disagree with the statement that teachers are less appretiate or valued today.

    Individuals are required to be equipped with more and more professional skills thanks to the specific division of work in modern society. If a person wants to graduate from university, he would have to take at least 16 years of study in schools. During this period of enriching himself, he would get help from so many teachers. Teachers not only teach him knowledge but also mold his character. Teachers’ existence accompanies the first twenty years of a human being and the influence will surely last to the end of life. With more people recognize the significance of teachers, the teachers are being appreciated and valued much more than before.

    This increased valuation not only stays on the individual level but also rises from the national perspective. With the development of technology, every country in the world has seen the power of it. Developing technology can not without the help of the outstanding talented people and those people are exactly cultivated by teachers. Countries are inclining more and more resources in normal schools. With governments doing so, the public is also led to evaluate more on teachers’ work. Thus more and more teachers are appreciated by parents and students.

    To summarize, the teachers are getting appreciated and valued much than before in modern society.

     

    November 14, 2019 at 2:57 am

    Score: 61.1

    Children are the future of the [ article error ] country and teachers are those who make the future better. [ lack a transitory word ]More and more kids are given the opportunity of going to school. Based on that[unclear pronoun  ], I disagree with the statement that teachers are less appretiate[ grammatical error ] or valued today.

    Individuals are required expected to be equipped with [passive/redundant  ] possess more and more expansive professional skills thanks to the specific division of work[ unclear ] in modern society. If a person wants to graduate from university, he would have to take at least 16 years of study in schools. During this period of enriching himself [ redundant ], he would get help from so many teachers. Teachers not only teach him knowledge but also mold his character. Teachers’ existence accompanies the first twenty years of a human being[unclear  ] and the influence will surely last to[ wrong preposition ] the end of[  ] life. With more people recognize[ grammatical error ] the significance of teachers, the[article error  ] teachers are being appreciated and valued much more than before[  repetition from the prompt].

    This increased valuation not only stays on the individual level but also rises from the national perspective. [ lack logical connection from the prior sentence ]With the development of technology, every country in the world has seen the power of it[ unclear pronoun ]. Developing technology can not without the help of the outstanding talented people [  grammatical error/unclear]and those people are exactly cultivated by teachers[ confusing ]. Countries are inclining[wrong word  ] more and more resources in normal schools. With governments doing so, the public is also led to evaluate more on teachers’ work[  grammatical error]. Thus more and more teachers are appreciated [ repetition ]by parents and students.

    To summarize, the teachers are getting appreciated and valued much than before in modern society.[  repetition from the prompt]