Technology has made children less creative

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  • mashrio
    University: ncist
    Nationality: china
    September 8, 2020 at 2:38 pm

    Technology has made children less creative.

    Some people may complain that the developement of technology has made children less creative ,it is true that some of the students finish all there assignments by copy on the internet .However it is just the small proportion of students who lack of self-discipline and autonomy,the clever ones just consider internet a tool which can help them in their study.

    Everthing has been transformed under the magic influence of computer technology and internet ,it changed the way students learns ,works ,and communicates,internet has become an intergral part of student’s school and social life. It is not the technology that make children less creative ,but themselves. Actually ,they will still be idle and shiftless unless one day they stop to find fast approaches in study and think independently .Have those people ever think about why the other part of kids are still creative and even more well -rounded under the same condition.They are solely finding excuses for their morderation.Technology is just a tool ,the most important is the student himself.

    Nothing can stop a man with right attitude from achieveing his goal,and nothing on earth can help a man with wrong attitude .In the current few century,scientists had launched manned aircraft to the moon,remade the DNA programming of wheat whcich combatted the starvation,and etc.Things has been changed far more in past hundred years than any other century in history,the reason is not political,economic,but technological,the advances flow directly from basic science.All these innovations are made by the same generation with those who are found less creative.

    Had us ever thought about how did we live coveniently and comfortbly,we would never doubt the technology make the world worse.They may blame on anything else if there is no advances in technology. I may say there is very little harm ,if any technology has brought us -the prevalent tempetation .

    September 8, 2020 at 4:27 pm

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