Some people think the developments of technology make people’ s life more complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  • Mejun
    University: Jinan
    Nationality: China
    March 14, 2020 at 2:24 pm

    Some people think the developments of technology make people’ s life more complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    It is clear that the developments of technology change our life a lot. Some people hold the view that the increasing technology makes people’s life more complicated so we ought to make the life simpler without using technology. I don’t think this statement is right.

    There is no doubt that the developments of technology make our life more convenient. For instance, the development of mobile phone is not only a tool for communication, but also a convenient method for booking hotel and shopping. What’s more, the invention of Wechat pay and Alipay rids us from bringing cash to go out. In modern China, the only thing you need to bring out is your mobile phone instead of wallet. Except from mobile phone, highway and underground transportation are also an indication of the convenience brought by technology.

    Admittedly, the development of technology may also bring trouble to us. For example, the eyes of children will become worse resulting from the exposure to the screen of computer and mobile phone. Also, the invention of social platform accelerates the appearance of Internet violence. However, it is unreasonable to equal the wrong of the way using technology to the wrong of technology. Correct ways of using technology can make our life more efficient.

    Actually, technology can be connected to the evolution of human. When human discovered the way of firing, they didn’t need to eat raw meat. When human invented axes and gun, they had more insurance in hunting animals. The result of technology always depends on how we use it.

    In summary, we should use technology correctly instead of giving up it to make our life more various.

    March 16, 2020 at 1:28 am

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