the bar chart below shows the percentage of boys and girls aged 5-14 in Australia in who participate in various activities during two-week period.

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  • lmy
    University: xjdszyjy
    Nationality: china
    October 6, 2020 at 7:07 am

    The bar charts compare boys and girls in terms of their participle  activities within two week  in Australia.

    The proportion of boys who play computer games are the highest among all subjects.In contest, the percentage of girls in the subject is over 60%.

    There are similar patterns in the cycling and skateboarding: The proportion of hight-performing boys more than doubled to about 40% and 60% while the figure for girls only about 20% and 40%.Art can crafts has different pattern, it is participated by over 40% of the girls highest than boys.By comparison ,the proportion of boys who chose watch TV is similar  to the figurer for girls.

    In short, watching TV is the top activity for boys and girls.The percentage of boys  highest  than girls  in all activities while the art can crafts.

    October 14, 2020 at 4:29 pm

     

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