The bar graph compares the number of people from China, Japan, the USA and Russia in universities applying to join one research from 2004 to 2008.
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June 19, 2022 at 2:14 am
The bar graph compares the number of people from China, Japan, the USA and Russia in universities applying to join one research from 2004 to 2008. It can be clearly seen that more and more applicants from these countries except for China tended to apply for this research.
Based on the data of 2004, the number of applicants from China accounted for the largest part, reaching approximately 28K, followed by that in the USA. However, the number of Russian applicants was the least, only one tenth the number of that in China.
From 2004 to 2005, the number of people applying for this research from China and Russia showed a significant decrease, while the number of American applicants increased at the same time. Meanwhile, the number of applicants from Japan stabilised at roughly 7500.
After 2005, the patterns in the change of the applicants in the USA, Japan and Russia were much similar distributed: all of them had slight increases in these 4 years. Furthermore, the largest proportion had been American applicants instead of Chinese applicants, the number of which had decreased to 18K.
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June 22, 2022 at 12:47 amTopic:
The chart below shows the number of applicants from four different countries in universities in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
June 22, 2022 at 1:36 pmThe bar graph compares the number of people[ /students ] from China, Japan, the USA and Russia in universities applying to join one research from 2004 to 2008. It can be clearly seen[try to avoid using passive/It is clearly visible ] that
more andmore applicants from these countries except for China tended to apply for this research.Based on the data of 2004, the number of applicants from China accounted [ accounts ] for the largest part, reaching approximately 28K, followed by that
in[ of ] the USA. However, the number of Russian applicants was the least, only one tenth[one-tenth of China’s number ]the number of that in China.From 2004 to 2005, the number of people applying for this research from China and Russia
showed a significant decrease[ decreases significantly ](,)while the number of American applicantsincreased at the same time[ increases during the same period of time ] . Meanwhile, the number of applicants from Japanstabilised[ stabilises ] at roughly 7500.After 2005, the patterns[ pattern ] in the
change[ numbers ] of the applicants in the USA, Japan and Russiawere[ is ] much similar[similarly ] distributed: all of them had slight increases in these 4[ four ] years. Furthermore,the largest proportion had been[the ] American applicants instead of [ the ] Chinese applicants [ turns out to be the largest portion ] , [ and ] the number of whichhaddecreased[ decreases ] to 18K.[ You don’t have to use the past tense when you describe the number of xxx in historical periods. ]
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