The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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February 14, 2020 at 2:54 am
The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays the changes in percentage of households owning or renting housing in England and Wales in 20th century.
According to the data shown in the chart, the percentage of population preferring to live in the owned home possessed a steadily upward trend, which raised the highest at about 70% in 2001, and fell a bit to around 65%. On the contrary, a decline can be found in the percentage of people who choose rental housing, from 75% all the way down to approximately 30%.
Besides, it is clear that 1971 was a watershed, which was the starting point that people tended to live in owned house over rented accommodation.
Before that, more households chose to live in rental housing, and the biggest gap happened in 1918, with only 20 percent of household living in owned house.
This situation inverted after 1971, more households chose to live in rental housing, with the number accounting for more than twice that of population in rented accommodation between 1991 to 2001.
In a conclusion, the number of people living in rented and owned accommodation had experienced the converse trends in the two regions between 1918 to 2011.
February 14, 2020 at 4:20 amScore: Ungraded
Issues:
- 100% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- Nearly 30% of the sentences are passive. Convert them into their active counterparts.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
February 14, 2020 at 10:30 amThe bar chart displays the changes in the percentage of households owning or renting housing in England and Wales in 20th century.
According to the data shown in the chart, the percentage of the population preferring to live in the owned home possessed a steadily upward trend, which raised the highest at about 70% in 2001, and fell a bit to around 65%. On the contrary, a decline can be found in the percentage of people who choose rental housing, from 75% down to approximately 30%.
Besides, it is obvious that 1971 was a watershed. People tended to live in the owned house over rented accommodation since then. Before that, more households chose to live in rental housing. The greatest gap happened in 1918, with only 20 percent of household living in owned house. This situation inverted after 1971 and more households chose to live in rental housing, with the number accounting for more than twice that of population in rented accommodation between 1991 to 2001.
In a conclusion, the number of people living in rented and owned accommodation had experienced the converse trends in the two regions between 1918 to 2011.
February 14, 2020 at 4:56 pmScore: Ungraded
Issues:
- About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
February 21, 2020 at 5:49 amThe bar chart displays the changes in the percentage of households owning or renting housing in England and Wales in 20th century.
According to the data, the percentage of the population preferring to live in the owned home possessed a steadily upward trend, which raised the highest at about 70% in 2001, and fell a bit to around 65%. Conversely, a decline can be found in the percentage of people who choose rental housing, from 75% down to approximately 30%.
Besides, it is obvious that 1971 was a watershed. People tended to live in the owned house over rented accommodation since then. Before that, more households chose to live in rental housing. The greatest gap happened in 1918, with only 20 percent of household living in owned house. This situation inverted after 1971 and more households chose to live in rental housing, with the number accounting for more than twice that of population in rented accommodation between 1991 to 2001.
In a conclusion, the number of people living in rented and owned accommodation had experienced the converse trends in the two regions between 1918 to 2011.
March 4, 2020 at 10:51 pmScore: ungraded
Issues:
- About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- More than 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
