The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.

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I agree that the extended family is less important than it was in the past. Maybe around fifty years ago, (living with extended families)[ unclear; distinguish ‘an extended family’ from ‘extended families’] was necessary for individuals to ensure their[ ensures one’s  ] survival. [ incoherence between sentences (make the subject of a sentence echo the subject/object of the prior sentence)  ] Living resources such as food and shelter were barely possible for ordinary people to get. However, in [ In  ]modern [ society, however,  ]society’s context, where people can get[ /obtain  ] survival resources easily,[ punctuation error  ] [ incoherence between sentences  ]I do not consider[ believe that  ] the extended family as important as it is[ grammatical error  ] anymore.

The extended family was important because people could only live with safety and security by living[ word repetition  ] together. Since most governments around the world (have much more power to keep the stability)[ unclear  ] of society, people can live happily and adequately[wrong word   ] (even as only)[ unclear  ] an individual. There’s a pronounced tendency that (people are living with nobody but themselves)[ switch from unconditional writing to conditional writing ] or only with close family members. Thus it can be concluded that people’s need to live with [ in an  ]extended family has decreased.

Besides, living with many family members can cause[/could lead to   ] a series of potential issues. Conflict often happens even in a close[ nuclear  ] family, let alone in an extended family[word repetition   ]. Individualism has affected young groups very profoundly[ unconditional writing  ]. Young groups nowadays always [ unconditional writing  ]try to show their personalities, and[ so  ] the countless conflicts between them and their family members come[/often emerge   ]. Most of my friends and I have experienced arguing or fighting with our parents during our teenage. What if (a couple more)[ wrong phrase  ] people (from extended families)[unclear   ] live with us? It’s not hard to infer that there would be [  Apparently, ]more conflicts and quarrels [might follow   ].

In many situations, (extended family members)[  unclear ] are nobody but strangers to people nowadays, for[ since  ] they sometimes cannot even recall each other’s names. Of course, many people can be [ use verb to replace BE verb  ]very close to some of their extended family members, but this concept of extended families is broken and (will not be as significant)[unclear   ].