# The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012.

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• floria
University: liverpool
Nationality: China
January 23, 2022 at 1:40 pm

### The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012.

The line graph above reflects the production of electrical power in France during the period from 1980 to 2012.

It is clear that the nuclear power was the highest created by the power station. Renewable power had a negligible amount of electrical power over the period shown.

In 1980, thermal power was 150 terawatt hours as the highest one. Nuclear power and hydroelectric power stations generated around 75 terawatt hours each. The renewable power station was at a lower level. What is worth mentioning is that nuclear power exceeded thermal power in 1981 as the main source of electricity power.

Nuclear power increased constantly and reached a peak of 435 in terawatt hours in 2005. On the contrary, thermal power kept decreasing after 1982. Hydroelectric power remained at a constant level in these 32 years. However, renewable power only saw a small rise starting from 2000.

January 24, 2022 at 3:26 am

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floria
University: liverpool
Nationality: China
January 25, 2022 at 1:27 pm

The line graph above reflects the production of electrical power in France during the period from 1980 to 2012.

It is clear that nuclear power has been the largest source of generation. Renewable power had a negligible amount of electrical power over the period shown.

In 1980, thermal energy was 150 terawatt hours, making it the most powerful. Nuclear and hydropower generating facilities generated about 75 terawatt hours each. The renewable power plant was lower than that. What is worth mentioning is that nuclear power exceeded thermal power in 1981 as the main source of electrical power.

Nuclear power has been dramatically increasing, peaking at 435 terawatt hours in 2005. On the contrary, thermal power kept decreasing after 1982. Hydroelectric power remained at a constant level in these 32 years. Unfortunately, renewable power only saw a small rise starting from 2000.

January 25, 2022 at 2:26 pm

The line graph above reflects[/ shows  ] the production of electrical power in France during the period from 1980 to 2012.

It is clear that nuclear power has been[was   ] the largest source of generation. Renewable power had[ /contributed to  ] a negligible amount of electrical power over the [ same  ] period shown.

In 1980, thermal energy was 150 terawatt hours, making it the (most powerful)[ unclear  ] . Nuclear and hydropower generating facilities generated about 75 terawatt hours [ , respectively  ] each. (The renewable power plant was lower than that)[unclear   ] . What is worth mentioning is that [ Notably,  ] nuclear power exceeded thermal power in 1981 (as)  [ confusion  ] [ and became  ]  the main source of electrical power.

Nuclear power has been[ experienced/had  ] dramatically increasing[a dramatic increase   ] , peaking at 435 terawatt hours in 2005. On the contrary, thermal power kept decreasing after 1982. Hydroelectric power remained at a constant level in[ /during  ] these 32 years. Unfortunately, renewable power only saw a small rise starting from 2000.

February 15, 2022 at 3:08 pm

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