The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph.
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May 30, 2020 at 9:38 am
The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph.
The line graph gives data on the global grain harvesting areas from 1950 to 1990s. It is evident that the worldwide grain harvesting areas saw a general climb on this period, on which lands’ program in USSR and rise in world grain prices had positive effects and was adversely affected by retrenchment.
Increasing from approximately 590 million hectares in 1950, the agricultural area grew uniformly to just 650 after the advent of The USSR Virgin Land Program. Despite the fluctuation beyond the climb, it still increased to 700 million hectares generally.
When the grain price was doubled, the cultivation lands’ area soared, reaching the peak of the vicinity of 750 million hectares. However, there was a negligible slip in around 1978.
When it comes to the retrenchment, the situation turned worse. The area plummeted to 700 million hectares from the highest point in 1985, leading to the end with slightly changes.
June 2, 2020 at 1:19 amScore: ungraded
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June 2, 2020 at 12:42 pmThe line graph gives data on the global grain harvesting area from 1950 to the 1990s. The worldwide grain harvesting area saw a general climb but was influenced by three factors during this period.
Starting from approximately 590 million hectares in 1950, the agricultural area grew continuously to just 650 thanks to the advent of The USSR Virgin Land Program. Despite the fluctuation beyond the climb, it still increased to 700 million hectares generally.
When the grain price doubled, the cultivation lands’ area soared, which reached the peak of the vicinity of 750, by 50 million hectares. However, there was a negligible slip in around 1978.
Due to retrenchment, the figure turned worse. The area dropped to 700 million hectares from the highest point in 1985, reaching the end with a fluctuation at 700 million hectares in about 1995.
Overall, the amount of grain farmland saw an overall upward trend from 1950 to the 1990s by around 100 million hectares.
June 2, 2020 at 4:01 pmScore: 67.7
The line graph gives data on/concerning the global grain harvesting area from 1950 to the 1990s. According to the graph, the
Theworldwide grain harvesting area saw a general climb (but was influenced by three factors during this period) [logically confusing ].Starting from approximately 590 million hectares in 1950, the agricultural area grew continuously to just 650 in 1990 thanks to the advent of
Thethe USSR Virgin Land Program. (Despite the fluctuation beyond the climb) [ unclear ], it [unclear pronoun/use noun instead ] still increased to 700 million hectares generally.When the grain price doubled, the cultivation lands’ area soared, (which reached the peak of the vicinity of 750) [unclear ], by 50 million hectares. However, there was a negligible slip in terms of xxx in around 1978.
Due to retrenchment, the figure [ unclear ] turned worse. The area [unclear ] dropped to 700 million hectares from the highest point in 1985, reaching the end with a fluctuation at 700 million hectares in about 1995.
Overall, the amount of grain farmland saw [repetition/showed ] an overall upward trend from 1950 to the 1990s by around 100 million hectares.
