The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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  • yichen
    University: HIT
    Nationality: 中国
    February 27, 2022 at 1:04 am

    The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

    The line graph describes the proportion of tourists visiting a special Caribbean island during the period of seven years.

    It can be seen that the total number of people who visited the island keeps rising from 2010 to 2017 except in 2016. Besides, there were more visitors who choose to spend their time on island instead of cruise ships between 2010 and 2015. More people tended to stay on cruise ships in 2016 and 2017.

    It is obviously that there were approximately 3.5 millions of visitors who visited the particular Caribbean island totally in 2017, which was more than tripple of the number in 2010 (1 million). Almost 1.5 millions of tourists prefered to spend more time on cruise ships in 2013, 2014, 2015 and 2017, which was the highest number during the period of seven years.

    Furthermore, the proportion of visitors choosing to stay on island kept rise up stably except in 2012, which was about 0.25 million. And the number arived to a peak at 2 millions in 2017. In 2015, there were 1.5 millions and about 1.25 millions of tourists staying on island and cruise ships respectively. Then, the number above reversed just after one year.

    February 27, 2022 at 4:33 pm

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    yichen
    University: HIT
    Nationality: 中国
    February 28, 2022 at 1:10 pm

    The line graph describes the proportion of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island over a period of seven years.

    It is clear that the total number of people who visited the island keeps rising from 2010 to 2017 except in 2016. Besides, there were more visitors choosing to spend their time on the island instead of cruise ships between 2010 and 2015. More people tended to stay on cruise ships in 2016 and 2017.

    It is obvious that there were approximately 3.5 million visitors who visited the particular Caribbean island totally in 2017, which was more than triple of the number in 2010 (1 million). Almost 1.5 million tourists preferred to spend more time on cruise ships in 2013, 2014, 2015 and 2017, which was the highest number over the period of seven years.

    Furthermore, the proportion of visitors choosing to stay on island kept rise up stably except in 2012, which was about 0.25 million. And the number arrived to a peak at 2 million in 2017. In 2015, there were 1.5 million and about 1.25 million tourists staying on island and cruise ships, respectively. Then, the number above reversed just after one year.

    February 28, 2022 at 3:14 pm

    The line graph describes the proportion of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean island over a period of seven years.

    It is clear that the [ The  ] total (number of people who visited)[ /visits to  ] the island keeps[ grammatical error  ] rising from 2010 to 2017 except in 2016. Besides, (there were more visitors choosing)[verbose/more visitors chose   ] to spend their time on the island instead of cruise ships between 2010 and 2015. More [ while more  ] people[ /visitors  ] tended to stay on cruise ships in 2016 and 2017.

    It is obvious that there were approximately [Approximately   ] 3.5 million visitors who visited the[/a/this   ] particular Caribbean island totally in 2017, which was more than triple of [tripled   ] the number in[ /of  ] 2010 (1 million). Almost 1.5 million tourists preferred to spend more time on cruise ships in 2013, 2014, 2015 and 2017, [  respectively, ] which was the highest number over the period of seven years.

    Furthermore, the proportion of visitors choosing to stay on[article error   ] island kept rise up[ repetition  ] stably except in 2012, which was about 0.25 million. [ punctuation error with coordinating conjunction  ] And (the number)[ unclear  ] arrived to a peak [ peaked  ] at 2 million in 2017. In 2015, there were (1.5 million and about 1.25 million)[ unclear  ] tourists staying on island and cruise ships, respectively. Then[  One year later ] , the number above[ this number  ] reversed just after one year.

    February 28, 2022 at 3:28 pm

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