The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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  • Irene Liu
    University: China University of Political Science and Law
    Nationality: Chinese
    July 7, 2020 at 6:13 am

    The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

    The line graph illustrates the number of people travelling to a Caribbean island between the time period of 2010 and 2017.

    The total number of visitors was increasing with a fluctuation. There were 1 millions of visitors in 2010 and it rose to about 2.8 millions in 2015. Then the total number dipped to about 2.6 millions in 2016, which grew to 3.5 millions in 2017.

    Staying on cruise ships was the least popular option in 2010, at 0.25 millions. In 2011, there were 0.5 millions of tourists choosing to stay on cruise ships. In 2012, the number of tourists staying on cruise dropped to 0.25 millions again. However, staying on the cruise ships became more and more popular from 2012 to 2017, which climbed to 2 millions in 2017.

    There were nearly 0.75 millions of people who preferred to stay on island in 2010, and the number remained constant from 2010 to 2011. Then it gently increased to 1.5 millions in 2013 and kept stable from 2013 to 2015. In 2016, the number dipped to about 1.35 millions and rose to 1.5 millions again in 2017.

    In general, there were more and more people going to a Caribbean island to enjoy themselves, and cruise ships in the island became more and more popular.

    July 7, 2020 at 9:03 pm

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