The line graph below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 and 2010.

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    University: UCL
    Nationality: China
    August 3, 2021 at 1:37 pm

    The line graph below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 and 2010.

    The chart below illustrates the different areas of land which used for planting organic food of two countries from 1985 to 2010.

    The rates are similar at the beginning, and then they are totally different.
    For country A, the line rased in a normal rate. After that, it increased more, and it’s about 100 thousand hectares. It was still adding until 2000. After that year, the line changed into an opposite direction. At last, in 2010, it finally reached 150 thousand hectares.

    Line of country B seemed more active than A’s directly. At the beginning of this period, it increased slower than A’s, then reached the hectares nearly 300 thousand. From 2000 to 2005, that line began to reduce a little bit. Last but not least, it decreased as a rapid speed and seemed lower than line A in 2010.

    The line graph below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 and 2010.As a result, from 1985 to 1995, two countries’ numbers looked so similar. To began with 1995, there were quite opposite numbers from each other. However, before 2010, they had met on the same point.

    August 4, 2021 at 2:04 am

    The chart below illustrates the[article error  ] different areas of land which used [ grammatical error ] for planting organic food of[preposition error  ] two countries from 1985 to 2010.

    The rates are similar at the beginning, and then they are totally different.
    For country A, the line rased in a normal rate. After that, it increased more, and it’s about 100 thousand hectares. It was still adding until 2000. After that year, the line changed into an opposite direction. At last, in 2010, it finally reached 150 thousand hectares.

    Line of country B seemed more active than A’s directly. At the beginning of this period, it increased slower than A’s, then reached the hectares nearly 300 thousand. From 2000 to 2005, that line began to reduce a little bit. Last but not least, it decreased as a rapid speed and seemed lower than line A in 2010.

    The line graph below shows the land used for organic crops in two countries between 1985 and 2010.As a result, from 1985 to 1995, two countries’ numbers looked so similar. To began with 1995, there were quite opposite numbers from each other. However, before 2010, they had met on the same point.

    August 4, 2021 at 2:36 am

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